Damn good so far. But it's been so so SO LONG since an update. I've been checking in on this story for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... It's too good to be abandoned, & I'm scared that you seem to have utterly done just that. Please don't do that. Coax the muses back out of hiding and update soon. Please.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm really interested to find out how they gonna find a body for John. Good chapter overall although in my opinion it lacked action. It will be more interesting if the demon in hell actually spotted them and chasing them. I really like to torture the Winchesters. Bwahahaha...I'm evil!
Review By [link] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from vinniebatman
Review:
Whoa, very cool. Can't wait for more.
Review By [vinniebatman] • Date [19 May 07] • Not Rated
We are getting to the good part. I'm curious to see how you will describe hell and the rescue mission. Please update this fic soon. I want to know what happen next.
Review By [link] • Date [27 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I like the details you put when you describe the ritual to find the soul. Nice touch about the chocolate bar. John being in hell bothered me a lot when I watched Supernatural. At least in fanfic, he can get out of hell. I'm looking forward to read the rest of your fic. I hope John isn't too damage mentally. Please update soon!
Review By [link] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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