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The Fight for the Krum

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Caliadragon
Review:
It looks like it could be an interesting read, but your lack of punctuation and sentence structure made it hard to read.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Rating [3 out of 10]
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