Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Demona
I reviewed on your LJ but this just deserves review love all over! So copied shamelessly from my LJ reply:
I'll honestly tell you I wasn't sure what I was expecting from my promtps, but you have blown me away. I liked this - like a lot.
You did a great job with Dean's character and Riley's as well, putting them together isn't easy, but you managed to do it well. The slight sexual tension between the two of them was just right, not overly anything, and believable enough on Dean's part. The comment about Dean being a male version of Faith is spot-on - I've thought the same thing myself many a times.
And I'm shocked (happily) that Dean had enough sense to not lead Riley back to the Impala and expose himself any further than he already had. I'm sure it was a hardship for Dean to think with his upstairs brain, but I'm glad you wrote it that way.
And the last couple paragraphs, about Dean being a Hunter (with a capital H) is so entirely true. You managed to capture everything that was Dean, and define everything he wasn't.
Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fic-a-thon entry for me! And I'm especially impressed because you mentioned that you didn't get the prompt until yesterday - great job on such short notice!
Comments from author:
Thansk again, i had a lot of fun with this, so i guess i'm adding a new pairing to my favourites list.
Review By [Demona
] • Date [20 Mar 07] • Not Rated