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Review of chapter "chapter thirteen" from DragonBard
Review:
You'd think she'd have asked for the people they'd lost, her mother, Jenny, and Anya (if not Spike and Cordy as well.)
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter seven" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::

I hope you get inspired to continue this story.
Comments from author:
i will eventually, college is taking up a lot of my time.
i'm going to update this next cuz i haven't updated this since April...wow, long time.
thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter six" from arkeus
Review:
nice :-)
this is quite nice, indeed, much better written than your other fics, though there is a few awkward part here and there, like levi taking so long to understand hat willow was implying, and the fact that they just don't try to both attack him with magic while someone shoot/olaf hammer him.
Comments from author:
I definitely had a hard time writing most of this chapter, and unlike Sudden Changes it isn't Beta'd at all.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [arkeus] • Date [21 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from arkeus
Review:
hum...interesting, though i never liked the whole seeping magic's off someone else. I always preferred to think it was someone's "habit" that were forcibly copied. The same with the books, i don't think there was any pwoer in them, or much. i just think willow needed more *knowledge* and practice. By habit, i mean that the more someone practice one spell, the more ingrained it becomes in the person's body, along with the emotions assimilated with the spell. Hence, by "draining" rack, willow would, in my own little fantasy world, have copied both his spellbooks and his emotions. Same with giles...
It's just that, if it were possible to drain someone else of their *power*, rack would have taken willow as a slave, draining her every morning as a battery, and countless others too. :p
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
I think that Rack was taking a little of Willow's power every time she went to him; maybe he fed off Willow's less-dark magic while transferring his dark and addictive magic.
It's just a theory, i don't understand what happened between her and Rack.
Thanks for the constructive criticism (o:
Review By [arkeus] • Date [21 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter five" from Infinix
Review:
It's very nice to see someone qustion Willow's place in the war. I am a big Xander fan adn it has always irked me that even in S2 and S3 when Willow had little to no skill with magic it was only he that was questioned and even when she was a more skilled practioner it was always accepted that she chose to help and that was it. Can't wait for more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I'll start the next chapter asap! (:
Review By [Infinix] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
This is a small note, but it seemed weird to me that you listed Willow's IQ as "130+." Most IQ tests don't cut off at 130, so if she had an IQ higher than 130, they would have just given her the number. Also, 130 isn't actually all that incredibly high. It's in the top four percent of the population, but it's not genius-level, and Willow probably falls much closer to the top 1 percent, if not higher.
Comments from author:
Really?
Um...what's her IQ then? cuz i don't know....i mean in general what percentage do you think she's close to?
About 145?
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter four" from metatwisted
Review:
Great Story! Any chance are you going to crossover w/ Charmed? Afterall your setting is in San Fran
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
No, sorry it's not a charmed xover, i just chose san fran because it was the first place that came to mind.
i'll post the next chapter asap (:
Review By [metatwisted] • Date [30 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter four" from ChaoticFred
Review:
Excellent work so far. Nice intro of an OC.
Comments from author:
Thanks!!!
Review By [ChaoticFred] • Date [29 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter three" from purrfus
Review:
Great flow, but - and I do know this isn't reasonable considering I think there is great flow - I was really not ready for the cliffie, and just a little miffed.

Xander and Buffy's internal conversations were well done, and an interesting means of providing individual emotional and mental status of the characters.
Comments from author:
Thanks!!
I haven't started on the next chapter, but i will soon!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from purrfus
Review:
intriguing. More would be appreciated.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
More coming up after i've updated my other story!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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