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A Visit To Sunnydale

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Review of chapter "The Kitchen Thing Again" from Harry
Review:
And so, the stories come full circle. It will be some time before Joyce can come back, but she will in time. But at least now, Red and B have had a chance to mourn and enjoy the time that they had with Joyce.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four Most Powerful Witches In The World" from Harry
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Well, the spell worked, but then trouble HAD to raise its head! I don't know if Joyce will EVER come back after what happened this night.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Plan In Motion" from Harry
Review:
And so, the decision is made. I just hope that Dawn can handle it. I know that Buffy can, but can DAWN?!?
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spike" from Harry
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Spike and Joyce always did have a interesting relationship. There was a lot of respect between the two, and Spike always made sure that her grave was treated right. Now, lets see how Xander votes on this matter.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Patrolling" from Harry
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Sounds like Piper and Buffy are hitting it off pretty well. Now, lets see how Vamps deal with CHARMED POWER!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Think About The Consequences" from Harry
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I agree with the title of this chapter. Dawn needs to think of the consequences about bringing Joyce back. She is just not ready for it!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Secrets Here" from Harry
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Sometimes, the direct approach is the best way to tell things. And Piper had to tell it straight, to make sure that it got across. I just hope that Willow doesn't loose it again. Be awfully hard to explain a house destruction in Sunnydale, except by Natural Gas explosion.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discussing Willow" from Harry
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Bit, I KNOW you were trying to protect Red, but she is a big Witch and can defend herself. Now, let this member of the Charmed Ones by and stop trying to be the overprotective one.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scrying For Willow" from Harry
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Well, I think that Piper is going to be in for a surprise when she gets to Sunnydale. People live in ignorance of what is going on there, and she is going to have a hard time finding Willow.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Kitchen Thing Again" from RavenMorbisk
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I liked the serie, really I did. It's a good idea but something just.. bothered me.. the way you wrote it just isn't my style, I guess.
Don't get me wrong, it's a good fic.. I guess I'm more of a girl who likes elaborate paragraphs, dialogues and descriptions.
Comments from author:
Hi,
Thanks for the review.
I don't expect everyone to love everything I write. There have been many stories I've read and didn't care for.
Everyone has his or her own style of writing. You're not the only one who has said that I should be more descriptive with my stories. But when I write, I want to get to the main idea without what I consider unnecessary padding.
Maybe that's the difference between male and female writing, who knows?
But I appreciate that you took the time to read and review the story.
Thanks again.
David
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Kitchen Thing Again" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
: - )

Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Kitchen Thing Again" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will be inspired to write more stories in this nicely written series.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

I am always trying to come up with new and fresh ideas for stories. And then find the time to get them "on paper." All I can say is please be patient.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four Most Powerful Witches In The World" from Bobboky
Review:
if a white lighter can become a dark lighter, can the reverse happen?
Comments from author:
I'll have to check with the Elders, not that they know anything.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four Most Powerful Witches In The World" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four Most Powerful Witches In The World" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Last I checked Darklighters used crossbows not fire. Slight edit: I like the fic and people seem in character so that's great.
Comments from author:
This is the Hellmouth, so some upgrades are to be expected.

Glad you like it anyway.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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