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Review of chapter "Of Fancy Homes and Broken Shins" from Demonspawn
Review:
I'd try to quote Oliver Twist here, but that'd give you the idea that you have a choice in the matter. You will finish this story. Soon. So there! *Sticks out tongue*
Comments from author:
This story lingers in the back of my mind, but if I finished the plot, there would be 17 more chapters. Bit scary. But I'm so glad you liked this, and thanks for the FB! Sorry it took so long to reply.

Alice
Review By [Demonspawn] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Fancy Homes and Broken Shins" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I am sorry I took so long in replying. But your review is much appreciated.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Fancy Homes and Broken Shins" from Chickalupe
Review:
I am so, so excited about this! Missed your stuff, glad to see you're back! I do love this series, too. ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks, hon, though I'm not really back. Things in RL have gone a bit mad and I haven't written in months. But thank you for the lovely words, they are much appreciated.
Review By [Chickalupe] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Fancy Homes and Broken Shins" from Hecatonchires
Review:
The little girl kicking them made me laugh
Comments from author:
Yeah, Sanura is quite protective of her Xander's Spike. She will pop up from time to time if I ever start writing again. Sorry it took so long to reply to your comment. My personal life hasn't been conducive to writing and I am afraid that doesn't look like it will change anytime soon.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Fancy Homes and Broken Shins" from Blackett
Review:
Interesting. Hope to see more soonish.
Comments from author:
I'm glad this interested you. Sorry it took so long to reply to your comment. My personal life hasn't been conducive to writing and I am afraid that doesn't look like it will change anytime soon. But thank you for reviewing. It is much appreciated.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Fancy Homes and Broken Shins" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Lovely- I love the Connor/Dean pairing- I think both of them need someone to looks after them but also to look after the other...its a good balance for both of them. I really wanna see Connor in action- cause if you think about it he was The Destroyer in Quor-Toth which means he can kick ass big time but also he has 17 years of experience while Faith and Buffy have less than 10 each...so while the Slayers have the knowledge how to use weapons automatically Connor rivals them in strength but exceeds them in experience and I think if he were to truly to let his inner Destroyer out they wouldn't stand a chance...Connor would have developed a purely animal side to deal with Quor-Toth- especially since demons fled from him there...while both Slayers would put up a great fight I think if truly in the mind to Destroy them he would be able to- while Connor loosing against Angel who has over 250 years of experience but also his time in hell makes it more understandable.
Comments from author:
Yeah, you know how Faith said slaying made her horney? I have the feeling watching Connor kill demons will have the same effect no Dean *grins*. I have a lot of ideas for the pairing, and for Sam and Dawn (I have a mental image of her climbing him like a big, sexy tree). I hope to update this faster than I did last time, LOL, but thanks for the feedback.

~Alice~
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from Nyn
Review:
Just read this again because I love this world you created so much. I really, really hope you get back to it someday!!!
Comments from author:
I wrote the next chapter, tried to think if I liked it, got it beta'd, pondered it some more, decided I didn't like parts of it, had some personal crap happen that destroyed my will to write, made some changes, and got it beta'd. I haven't been on TtH much, but I need to get back here, update it with new stuff. I just need to get back in the groove.

So long story short: I need to get some sleep so I don't babble at random comments. Also, more has been written, will post when I get the chance to sit down and do it properly.

~Alice~
Review By [Nyn] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from bliss
Review:
Aw man! *looks around* Ya did it again! Seriously, get to finishing this one. I wanna see what develops between Sam and Dawn...and to find out just who may attract sweet Dean's interest.
Comments from author:
I actually got chapter 3 of this one back from my beta. Sorry I haven't posted it. My husband decided to end our marriage, so I've been having a lot of trouble generating any interest in most things. But it is on the horizon. Promise.

~Alice~
Review By [bliss] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from nukeswolf
Review:
I really like this series, I hope that there will be more sometime soon. =)
Comments from author:
I go so many ideas that I have got about 12 or more half started stories.

But I do intend to work on this story in the future, and have written some more fore it.

I'm glad you like this! THanks for letting me know.

~Alice~
Review By [nukeswolf] • Date [4 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from Kirallie
Review:
Great series!! Hope there's more soon!!!
Comments from author:
Oh yes, there will be more. Lots of more.

Thanks for the feedback.

~Alice~
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good start, i think Dean and Connor would make a awesome couple, i think Connor needs someone willing to care for him and Dean needs someone strong and daring enough to be able to handle him. Update soon?
Comments from author:
Not too soon, I've gotten really busy in real life, but I do plan to update... eventually.

Thanks so much for the review!

~Alice~
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [27 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from ecstaticmanic
Review:
Amazing story so far! I really love the idea of Dean/Connor. It's so original, but I've never thought of anything more perfect! I cannot wait until you update! I hope it will be soon. Thanks for writing this!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you found and enjoyed this. There will be more though I am trying to finish some other stories I have in the works. But never fear, there will be more; in fact, I've already started on it. It was hard to find someone to pair with Dean in this situation, then someone suggested maybe Connor, and it made a lot of sense. Sam and Dawn are the types that would settle down to have families but still help. But I couldn't ever imagine Connor and Dean settling down.
Thanks so much for your feedback!
~Alice~
Review By [ecstaticmanic] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from Rachel
Review:
Ooooh, this is a great story so far! I love the Sam and Dawn meeting and I hehehe, Dean on a plane! :P I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I felt evil for sending Dean to Wales, because it would have to have been at least two plane rides. Poor Dean! ::cackles evilly::
I'm glad you liked the meeting between the two; I worked hard to have it make sense that they'd be gaga over each other right away.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
I makes me happy.
@lice
Review By [Rachel] • Date [12 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This is interesting. I still don't really like Sam and Dean much (which is one of the reasons I don't watch their show much), but you've done a nice job of both distinguishign them from each other, and pointing out elements that you want to concentrate on.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad that it didn't completely suck for you.
I'm glad you found it a worthwhile read anyways, and thanks for the feedback.
@lice
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Exactly the Mile-High Club" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
*Grins* I loved it! Its about damn time you updated a story in this series! I loved the meeting between the brothers and Dawn and can't wait to see the meeting between Connor and the brothers from Dean's point of view, it should be interesting! I also can't wait for the next chapter of When The Dead.... Please, please, please, please update either again soon!!!!

Lotsa Love,

Kyra
Comments from author:
I've already started on the meeting of Dean and Connor, but I've been crap at updating, to I'm trying to get going on, well, all of my stories.
thanks so much for the feedback, babe!
@lice
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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