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Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from FicChick
Review:
Good characterizations, especially Wash.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I love writing Wash; I consider myself to be a bit of a Wash. I'm so glad you thought I wrote him well, and appreciate the feedback.

~Alice~
Review By [FicChick] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Great! Love how Connor is in this- and Illyria calling him the half-breeds child was great!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I've noted you enjoy Connor. Anywhoo, I figure after a long time becoming accustomed to her form, Illyria would change in some ways, but be the same in others. And her notions of ownership over what she considers hers wouldn't change. She'd have to be different anyways, otherwise River's brain would explode at the crazyness.

~Alice~
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from deathgeonous
Review:
This was a fun story that I wish would be continued. And why is it that it seems that all good Illyria fics never get finished? They die off WAY too soon. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
I actually do plan on writing more. If you look at my other stories, you'll see they go for a long ass time before being updated.

Due to multiple WIPs (and the realization that I wasn't sure what direction I wanted to take the story in), I stopped work on this. But I do intend to continue this; I'm just not sure when.

But thanks for the feedback; it helps to get me thinking on a story.

~Alice~
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from queenevil
Review:
worth the wait:)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
It would have been up sooner, but I haven't been writing much. I just suck like that cause I'm a dork.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
@lice
Review By [queenevil] • Date [17 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from Teldra
Review:
I'm enjoying this so far! Can't wait for more. I liked the crews reactions.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the reactions. I figure Zoe is cool as long as she and mal can fight, Jayne is concerned with himself, and Wash is cool as long as Zoe is.
I'm so pleased that you're enjoying this.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
@lice
Review By [Teldra] • Date [14 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from Sio
Review:
HA, juggle geese! great story so far.
poor Simon!
can't wait to read more, please update again soon.
Comments from author:
I hope the next update will be sooner than this one; I just didn't write much last month.
I was a baaaaaad turtle.
Thanks for the feedback!
@lice
Review By [Sio] • Date [14 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
*grins* Yay! An update! I have seriously been looking forward to an update on this one! I never thought about Connor getting to the future the way he did. I can't wait for Mal to find out that he's the one Simon warms for. It shoud definitely be interesting! I'm glad that Kaylee's not too heartbroken about everything. I am a bit curious about who Giles got with, though. I've seen people pair him up with Buffy, but I've always thuoght that was kinda gross; he always thought of her as his daughter so for them to get together is kinda gross. But anyway, I can't wait to read more!!!!!! So please, please, please, please, please update again soon!!!!!! Pretty please? *gives you puppy dog eyes*

~ Kyra
Comments from author:
I haven't really thought about who Giles shagged to start a family, but in my mind, it wouldn't have been any of the BtVS regulars. It would have been and original character, a more mature woman or something.
I think that Kaylee was a smart girl, and during the series, she did care for Simon but hadn't really set her heart on him completely.
Yeah, Mal is going to have a very Mal-ish reaction to the news.
But thanks so much for the FB.
I know, I've been bad and haven't written too much lately.
Thanks for sticking with me though!
@lice
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [14 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ruminations and Answers" from littleoldme
Review:
I think you're making the Mal/Simon thing seem more realistic here, but part of me wishes that we'd gotten to see more of Connor and Illyria and less of the groundwork for the Mal/Simon relationship. I'm hoping that in the future, all of the relationships and characterizations will get equal play.
Comments from author:
Damn, woman. Or, uh, Man!
You're really going to keep me on my toes, aren't you?
::sighs::
Actually, thanks for your feedback, it is helpful. I did kick around a few ideas, one of which was to simply show everyones reactions to the events, thus giving us further insight into the characters. But for Alex, Illyria and Connor, it's wasn't that remarkable an event. Also, I found the crew's reactions to be the most enjoyable things to write, which is what I wrote. And I felt that until some basic questions were answered, the Serenity crew would be nervous about interracting with the passengers. Now that some of the basic questions have been answered, I plan on having more interaction between the crew and the passengers.
Thanks so much for your feedback, it truly is appreciated.
@lice
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [14 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mrs. Jayne Cobb" from LordCorwin
Review:
Interesting .... very very interesting...
Comments from author:
Interesting: is that good or bad?
I'm deciding it's good, so thanks a bunch.
@lice
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mrs. Jayne Cobb" from InchPrincess
Review:
wow. just wow. like really this is so good i really hope you update and like really soon this has the makings of a wonderful story. and just as i thought hmm i wonder what connor/river would be like i find your story. nice touch btw with the descendant of giles im deff looking forward to more. =)
Comments from author:
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.
More will be coming.
@lice
Review By [InchPrincess] • Date [8 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mrs. Jayne Cobb" from (Current Donor)Hotpoint
Review:
Nicely done but IMHO the Simon/Kaylee mutual attraction is rather too canon to play with given you're already doing a crossover.

Maybe I'm too much of a purist ;-)
Comments from author:
Eh. I don't care, I like Mal/Simon. But thanks for the feedback, hope you keep reading.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hotpoint] • Date [5 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mrs. Jayne Cobb" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Oh Gods, that was great! You have nothing to be worried about, Hun! The end part was frickin' hilarious!!!!! I'm guessing that Alex is a descendant of Giles? And that Connor is still alive because of his Vampire blood? Illyria's obviously still alive because, Hello, she's a God. I definitely can't wait for the next chapter of this one. This is actually only the second Serenity fic that I've read and I only read the other one because it was part of a Supernatural/BtVS series. Anywho, I'm totally loving this one, you should definitely continue it, like I said you have nothing to be nervous about where this one's concerned!
Comments from author:
Well, you got two out of three right.
Thanks so much for the review.
I heart you.
@lice
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mrs. Jayne Cobb" from athenethegoddess
Review:
looks interesting. hope you continue it. :D
Comments from author:
I plan on doing so as soon as I can.
Thanks so much for the FB,
@lice
Review By [athenethegoddess] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mrs. Jayne Cobb" from queenevil
Review:
I can't wait for everyone to find out who he warms for.
Comments from author:
*cackles*
They'll go crazy, and I'm working on Mal figuring it out, too. I think he'll be the last one, just for good times.
Thanks so much for the FB,
@lice
Review By [queenevil] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mrs. Jayne Cobb" from Emeraldiceus
Review:
This is great i love the ideal very good start and i can't wait to see what happens next.
So keep up the great work and update again soon!
Comments from author:
I will update, but I try to do it in order of my stories, so it might be a week or two.
Hope you keep enjoying it.
Thanks for the FB
@lice
Review By [Emeraldiceus] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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