"Teenage girls are falling out of midair and making dead monkey jokes," Wash said seriously. "How could now possibly be anything other than The Time?" *laughs*
"You guys wanna make a fort?" Awww, Ilove Kaylee!
Review By [DragonsPhoenix] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Very interesting story so far. The author's writing is good, letting the story flow along. Unfortunately, the author has not develope the plot further. I would really like to read more of this adventure!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Not Rated
I really enjoy the interaction between Dawn, Claire, and River. I like the way you've incorporated both the fun and the sad parts of being who they are. The reactions of the rest of the crew are amusing. Fun story.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
When I saw the summary, I thought, "Oh Christ, there is no possible way this is going to be anything but horrific." Thankfully, you proved me wrong. Very amusing, great job.
Review By [Bee] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Lol! This is a totally delightful story. I laughed nearly the whole time I was reading it. Loved the effects the girls are having on 'roguish' Mal and the rest of the crew. You are perfect with everyones' characters and voices. I look forward to more laughs and chortles. Soon, I hope.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
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