Very interesting story so far. The author's writing is good, letting the story flow along. Unfortunately, the author has not develope the plot further. I would really like to read more of this adventure!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Not Rated
I really enjoy the interaction between Dawn, Claire, and River. I like the way you've incorporated both the fun and the sad parts of being who they are. The reactions of the rest of the crew are amusing. Fun story.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
When I saw the summary, I thought, "Oh Christ, there is no possible way this is going to be anything but horrific." Thankfully, you proved me wrong. Very amusing, great job.
Review By [Bee] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Lol! This is a totally delightful story. I laughed nearly the whole time I was reading it. Loved the effects the girls are having on 'roguish' Mal and the rest of the crew. You are perfect with everyones' characters and voices. I look forward to more laughs and chortles. Soon, I hope.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
>>>After all, the Haitian had been completely immune to anything resembling a pout
I totally don't get that comment. Then again I stopped watching Heroes after December.
Comments from author:
Sorry- that is something you need to be up-to-date through March to get on the Heroes front. Basically, the Haitian (a person who has the power to mute other heroes' powers and to wipe their memories clean) is charged with taking Claire and hiding her after her identity is exposed, and there's an episode where Claire is all pouty and tries to convince him to take her where she wants to go, and he just flat turns her down.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Ponder
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