Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from ambe
I enjoyed this story quite a lot; the history of the earth was especially well done and fascinating. I hope one day you'll pick this back up. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [ambe
] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 31" from garrycooper
Great story! More please!
Review By [garrycooper
] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from borgrabbit
Is the story dead
Be nice to see where it led
Your muse—has it fled
A harmless haiku comment::
Others and the Keystone Cops:
It’s for your own good
Now bend over no peeking
Lightning rod in ass
Jack, Buffy, and the Scoobies:
Not the boss of me
Let us get the damn job done
Lightning shoots from ass
Review By [borgrabbit
] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from SEAborg
Quite an interesting story. It manages to continually keep you surprised, with twists and turns. It's also enjoyable to see people coming to wrong (although logical, based on their current knowledge) conclusions about others.
Review By [SEAborg
] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from BuffyFan
Hoping for an update soon.
Review By [BuffyFan
] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from serenityselena
this is one complicated situation ...
hope it will be ok ^__^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from Blackett
this story is whey to interesting to live it like that. please add an update.
Review By [Blackett
] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from leelaa
Buffy: "Trust me when I say we're not going to go running to anyone and spill our secrets. We totally get the whole not telling the whole world thing."
Kit echoed that. If her mom found out she helped fight demons she would be grounded until she was thirty.
Please, please, please update soon.
Review By [leelaa
] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from calikocat
Holy Crap...Just wow...Also, can't wait for more. lol
Review By [calikocat
] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from MarcusSLazarus
Intriguing bit of work, I have to admit.
Not only do you provide an interesting reason for Jack’s clone to be sent to Sunnydale in particular- the need to carry out a secret check-up regarding the reasons for the NID’s interest in the area-, but you created some very interesting personal interaction between Jack and the Scoobies even before he learned who they were and their connection to what he was there to investigate.
Add in such interesting twists as the nature of the poison Jack was infected with- one of those rare occasions where you’re grateful for the sarcophagus; as a result of its existence, Jack’s worst memory was made even worse by the fact that he COULDN’T die-, or Jack and Dawn’s brief time in another dimension (Or whatever that is; I’m still a bit hazy on that bit), and things were interesting even BEFORE Jack’s ‘history lesson’ from what appears to be Tara and Skaara showing up like that...
I particularly liked Jack’s speculation about the idea of Dawn being a former Ancient- or some kind of Ancient, given that she was green where every Ancient he’s ever seen has been white-; it fits the facts of the world as he knows it without actually establishing a DEFINITE link between the two.
Add in such minor-but-potentially-amusing current misunderstandings as the group’s belief that DANIEL was responsible for ‘Jack’ being tortured- as well as the more serious note about the implications of Tara’s attempt to explain what Jack’s doing there and the identity of Dawn’s captor-, and I think it’s safe to say that things are going to get interesting as this story continues; I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing what’s coming up...
(On a personal note, it was a bit of a let-down that Jack and Dawn are apparently never going to progress beyond friendship- I get that Jack would have issues due to him having the memories of his adult self, but they could have moved past that-, and I think it was an exaggeration to say that SG-1 stopped being interested in saving Jack when they learned that he was the clone- their priorities just ‘shifted’ to figuring out what had happened to the original Jack; helping him WAS still something they wanted to do, they just had another goal right then-, but that’s just a personal opinion and I can easily overlook it).
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [19 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Twenty-Three" from Blackdex
Buffy making a wish? shouldnt they know better by now?
Review By [Blackdex
] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from copisetik
Wow....this fic is super good! I originally shied away from this fic as I am not the world's biggest fan of Stargate--I think the concepts and characters are cool, but I have never really sat down and watched the show, most of what I know about it comes from Buffy crossover fics and watching a handful of episodes from the first few seasons--so a fic centering on a teenaged clone of one of the characters didn't sound like my cup of tea...but I am happy to report I was so totally wrong lol. I found myself surprised at how engaging the story was, and how entertained I was by Dawn and her high school buddies (Scoobies: TNG!) as main characters, as well as your alt take on S5. I have to admit, I was a little wigged out when it seemed like you were going for a Buffy/Xander romance, but their commitment to Dawn, and ultimately to each other as the last Scoobies in town reads very true, and is very sweet. I am totally tracking this bad boy, and I can't wait to read more
Review By [copisetik
] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from Sheilanni
You updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story with all its twists and wonderfulness. Please update again soon!!!
Review By [Sheilanni
] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from starletharlot
Ooooooooo, interesting.... Lots of thickening of the plot here! I went squeee! when Skaara showed up. It was so weird that they all ascended but didn't once drop by like Oma Desala did a lot. I mean what? So awesome you put Skaara in here, yes! Also, love the Daniel bit at the end. Totally what would happen to Daniel.
Review By [starletharlot
] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32" from Ansku
Great chapter :)
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated