I have never watched one episode of Kim Possible but your writing really flesh out the characters well enough that I could follow along and enjoy the story. Great job!
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks. :-)
It's been ages since I was a teenager so I'm never really sure how realistic I write these characters.
Love the story was realy suprised my how good it was. i like the cartoon, but you seem to have made the character a lot more real. you've allso done a really good jobe of joining the worlds. i hope to see more.
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I loved this story. It focuses on several aspects of slayers not covered in most stories I read, particularly in this last chapter. I'd love to see what this fiction would look like, say 6 monthes from now.
Review By [ThomasS] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Well darn. If it hadn't been for that note at the end I would have moved on expecting another chapter to follow. Guess I neglected to see the complete "yes" thing and the chapter title of epilogue as well.
This was a nice story showing Kim becoming a slayer. I enjoyed it. :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks :-). It does sort have that "just the beginning" feel to it... someday I hope to continue but I have so many other fics waiting to be finished -- I really need to work on those first.
Review By [KaylaShay] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Not Rated
This really turned out better than I thought possible when I saw that it was a KP crossover. Shows nicely team possible growing up. Definately would like to see a couple of sequals.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
First, the Kim/Shego pairing is so close to canon that I still haven't figured out if The Mouse doesn't pay attention, figures that the target audience won't notice, or is actively trying to foster alternative lifestyles just to stick it to Pat Robertson.
Next, this work, like most of your stuff, is really excellently fun to read. Thanks for posting it.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Not Rated
I liked the story. I'm hoping that you continue it. It's got to be the first kim possible cross that was worth reading I've seen. Please keep up the effort.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]