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Review of chapter "Heaven knows what a girl can do" from Drusilla
Review:
Hah, so I went back and read the summary a bit closer and saw that she never went to LA... silly me. Still liking it
Comments from author:
You haven't seen Devour yet. Oh my goodness, the treat in store for you.

Devour is perhaps appreciated best with the sound turned down so you can't hear the god awful script and your favorite album playing in the background as you take in the hour and a half of Jensen Ackles eye candy.

And i just spelled favourite without a 'u' instinctively. oh god what's happened to me?

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [Drusilla] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prop me up with another pill" from Drusilla
Review:
So I bought this movie and haven't had the time to watch it now. So now i'm curious and might end up watching it tonight. One thing though, I don't see how Faith could hire Kate to find out who she was, when Kate was the one that booked her in the first place when Faith ran in S4 Buffy and went to LA to Angel. When Faith turned herself in, Kate was there.... unless it's explained later, then disreguard this review... :0)

-J
Review By [Drusilla] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "As long as I want you, baby, it's all right" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice ending - not what I expected from this challenge, but great fun.
Comments from author:
The unexpected ending was Devours fault. The lead actor was hot and the only hero I could think of in Faith's age bracket living in a small town.

But the movie itself -

The whole Satan as a future in law premise made it hard to stop taking the piss.

But you wanted a nasty conspiracy and that was the best I could think of, the Council wanting what they did.

I wanted Xander to get bashed up in this, but it never happened. And he could never be evil enough to kill a child in cold blood like the villian in LKG was prepared to.

And I like Kate so much I had to give her a happy ending.

Thanks for giving me your opinion because as you issued the challenge I really wanted to know what you thought.

Wait till you see what I do with Midwich Cuckoos one day. Oh and wouldn't day of the triffids be fun? I can of course never do the B7 cross, not being British. ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As long as I want you, baby, it's all right" from JennyLal
Review:
Feedback as requested. It was definitely good. I always liked this movie - Geena Davis made a good badass. As usual it was a good blend of great humour and darkly interesting storylines.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for commenting on this epistle. I'm glad you found it funny. And especially glad you found it interesting.

I intended Xander to suffer more in this story but it never wound up happening.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "As long as I want you, baby, it's all right" from Poopers
Review:
Garbage - 'I Think I'm Parinoid' And loved the movie, always wonderd why it nobody noticed it.
Comments from author:
Yes Garbage I thought it fitted. Why did no one notice Devour in spite of the strong cast? The script in the last third of the movie was dreadful. But that movie had Jensen Ackles in nearly every single scene,
for that alone I love it.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [Poopers] • Date [7 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "As long as I want you, baby, it's all right" from Ouatic
Review:
A very chortle worthy chapter.

I especially liked this:

“Oh Fuck! She could have left it open.” Dakota complained to Connie. “Man, she’s so evil.”


Also, bit of a typo here:

“What with the D.N.A. detceting shit they show on C.S.I.”
Comments from author:
Thank you for the beta advice! Damn those typos. And thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad the Satan puns amused you.
Review By [Ouatic] • Date [7 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Steal me, deal me, anyway you heal me" from scottm
Review:
Interesting story. I like Caitlyn a lot, but I'm not sure whats up with her teddy bear or if she just likes to pretend. You were right about Xander not looking so good in this one. I wonder what he will do when he finds out he and Faith have a daughter and Faith is good now. Will Faith go back to being an active Slayer, even though she's a mother and soon to be wife?
Comments from author:
Whats up with the teddy bear will be revealed in the last chapter which I am writing now.

Faith's future will be explained as well.

thank you for reviewing.
Review By [scottm] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Steal me, deal me, anyway you heal me" from purrfus
Review:
Wild and wicked fun. Nice to Satan as mom because why should guys have all the fun?
Comments from author:
Not my brainwave sadly. The movie devour had Satan as a female.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Steal me, deal me, anyway you heal me" from KarlStahl
Review:
Hey, you forgot all about the magic whistle! That would really have been a surprise.

April Fool's aside - great setup for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for reviewing. Hopefuly might be able to wind story up next chapter.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heaven knows what a girl can do" from (Past Donor)Vesica
Review:
Okay, the bear? Creepy like woah.

Nice.
Comments from author:
Yes, the bear was inspired.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prop me up with another pill" from (Past Donor)Vesica
Review:
Interesting. I am finding the time jumps a little hard to follow, but I get that this is the set up for the rest of it. Also, there are a few little places I can't tell if you are doing stylized writing or if there are typos. Still - I have to know what happens next! ~Ves
Comments from author:
Darn, time jumps hard? I should have written (two months later beside it in brackets for clarity). I sometimes do that.

Probably typos if it has anything to do with commas. God, I suck at commas.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Steal me, deal me, anyway you heal me" from AllenPitt
Review:
Looks like Kate is going to throw a spanner in the works... meantime... Faith is going to be a big upset with the council, it seems like....
The council seems as cheap as ever. All those alchemists and they still won't pay much...
Comments from author:
The Council is definitely as cheap as ever. Alchemists. Yoou remember the scripts of Ats and Btvs so much better than me. I'd forgotten that line.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Steal me, deal me, anyway you heal me" from Ouatic
Review:
"Satan huh? Well, he’d be damned."

*Snort!*
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you liked that one liner. Someone had to say it about Satan.
Review By [Ouatic] • Date [31 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maim me, tame me, you can never change me" from KarlStahl
Review:
Very good story. The build-up is well done and I like the personalities you fitted the characters with. There are so many ways this story may continue, none of them good.

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for reviewing.

"Many ways this story could go none of them good."

Golly, you'll be surprised when they find a magic whistle that grants them wishes next chapter then, won't you?
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [30 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maim me, tame me, you can never change me" from AllenPitt
Review:
Hm...I'm pretty sure she didn't throw out her top after killing the deputy mayor-there's a scene after that where B. is trying to 'reason' with Faith--first scene shows her at the sink, scrubbinga way at it-- ie she was so poor she couldn't afford to throw away the top that could link her to the crime --very sad (still can't believe Giles didn't realize she had no money & help her out) --
yep, it's not just Faith bringing Xander into that area---he's really hardened up since the old days- makes sense, after what he's gone through he isn't that kid anymore. Pivotal moment will be what he does when he realizes who Caitlyn is. Hopefully not the same as the same person in the film....
Presumably Giles takes the place of the person Geena D. went to? .... Meanwhile Kate is already realizing Faith might not be who she thought she was....
Comments from author:
No in the tv show, we did see Faith trying to wash her top. Which shows how insane and not thinking she'd got by that stage as well as poor. Because DNA? But after Buffy left in my story, Faith's survival instincts kicked in and she burned it.

I think Faith must have got an allowance from the council for that motel after Giles found out the truth about her watcher being dead because how the hell did she fund it? Was she on the game? And the Watchers Council according to the Wet works squad complaining to Wesley in 'Sanctuary' were a bunch of cheapskates. Who made them fly economy class from the UK to California.

Xander would not be the kind of man ever, to lock a seven year old in a meat locker to freeze to death. Unless he thought she was a demon perhaps.

Faith would never go to Giles. She's a murderer. Kate's in danger.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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