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Review of chapter "The King's Wish" from CameronYoung
A chance for Andrew to be a badass? Hilarious. A chance for Andrew to be an idiot while Xander gets to play the strait man for once? Priceless. I think you could write some really good stuff in between the comedy about how being merged with Zoro and Luffy changes their personalities to their perspectives but they are really just showing new parts of themselves that were hidden while they were surrounded by superheroes.
Comments from author:
Luffy actually read this and wants me to put the other characters in too. I'm not sure is I will because that would mean I would have to gender bend several characters along the way. Not to mention my experience with One Piece comes to a halt when the crew meets Miss Sunday.
Review By [CameronYoung] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The King's Wish" from Kumoatsu
Please update it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
It was originally just meant as a one shot. I am thinking of a sequel but before i write it I have to reread One peice so that I know the characters better. And I'm a college student so I don't have a lot of time.

Any suggestions or Ideas you have would be welcomed for any future stories I write for this.
Review By [Kumoatsu] • Date [10 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The King's Wish" from Funkitated
This was delightful! I was trying so hard not to laugh while reading this. Short but funny.
I'm sad you had to end it. I almost wish you would have turned this into a series of drabbles or something with Andrew and Xander traveling the One Piece world and bugging the hell out of eachother until they get back home.
I just wanted to see so much more Andrew-fanboyisms and Xander irritation. Hehehe.
Eh, it was a great oneshot anyway, but I can still dream about more.

I especially liked how you responded to your own challenge. Kinda makes me want to respond to it to after seeing the incredibly entertaining aspects of this one, but I'd have no idea what to do.
Comments from author:
The scary thing is... this came to me in the shower. Just keep thinking on it and you never know whats going to pop in there. Your welcome to continue this one if you'd like. I just dont know enough about the Xander-Andrew relations because I have only see seasons 1, 3 and about 5 eps total from 5.

I'm very glad you liked it so much though. I just noticed a trend between Zoro and Luffy and (from what I've read) Xander and Andrew and went with it.
Review By [Funkitated] • Date [27 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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