I thoroughly enjoyed the story! Very interesting to read this from the perspective of Buffy joining with Feyd-Rautha! I only wish that there was more and was hoping against hope that maybe you would consider it...but even if you don't, this was such a very good read. Thanks for sharing!
Wow, that was disturbingly hot and utterly original. Coming from such a Paul and LetoII freak who never really cared much for Feyd that's high praise indeed. This a great one shot, but you really need to do a sequel to explain why/how Buffy became so dark. Also we the readers want to know how such an alliance between Buffy/Feyd will affect the Dune verse. Really please continue this.
Review By [IceLady] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Not Rated
WOW! I do hope that you take this further. I would be utterly enthralled to see more of this wickedly seductive story. Your portrayal of Feyd reminds me of Spike, which I'm guessing is your intent, as that was one of the few males that could make Buffy react like that. I don't have many fics that I give a ten to, as they are reserved for truly superlative works of fiction that don't have glaring typographical or grammatical errors. This is wonderful, and I'll really be disappointed if you don't continue it. Please?
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [29 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
There's one thing I forgot to mention that bugged me at first and then I changed my mind and liked it. Buffy's voice seemed a little off when I first read it. Then I realized that she had been in a foreign "universe" for some time. That screws with a person. She was blending, fitting in and I realized her voice was right. Not only that, but given what she had discovered about her reason for being brought to that universe, she had every right to sound darker.
Nice job again! While this piece works wonderfully as a stand alone, I would not be opposed to seeing more of this. Either something from Buffy's viewpoint that is concurrent with Feyd's, what occurs after this, or even a look at how Buffy arrived in the Landsraad and learned what she knew in this piece.
Review By [KaylaShay] • Date [28 Mar 07] • Not Rated