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Fates of Love: Queen of the Alexions

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
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*"I need information from you before I finally make my decision."* Giving the information away would be considered betrayal to Queen Buffy. Is not like Buffy was told everything about the Queen Hippolyta after all. So asking for that much information about Buffy isn't fair.

*"They also agreed to comply with Queen Hippolyta’s request for Buffy’s bio, faults and all. Buffy would hate it but based on her stance on dealing openly and honestly with the Amazons, they were sure she would accept their decision."*

That's plothole abuse. Betraying a Queen secrets can be punishable by death or at best, exile.

*“No, you can’t,” said the Amazon Queen, chuckling. “The decree banning you from going near the Portal is still in effect and won’t be able to be rescinded even if you assume the Throne.”*

The way amazon law works, The Queen of the Amazons could rescind it in case of an emergency.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [13 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RandomSelection
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Hey,

I really like your story and the depiction of Amazon society, but there is one thing that annoys me to no end: the fact that you call the healer of the Amazons 'Dr. Iris'. 'Doctor' is not only coming from Latin, but it is clearly a modern title, and about as fitting as the queen driving a sports car! Why don't you just call er 'Healer Iris'?

Yours
RandomSelection
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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Any chance of this being expanded. I love the idea of Buffy and the Alexions working with the Amazons. It has a certain balance to it. Anyway read it again and still love it.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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This is a wonderful story and add a great deal to the first Fates of Love story, thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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I really enjoyed the story and found it quite illuminating and delightful on many levels. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
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Wow, really nice fic here. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vladt
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wonderful read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
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I have just reread this story and it was just as good as the last time I read it.


::Starts reading the next story in the series::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
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I really enjoyed reading this fic but would like it if you broke it up into about 10 or more chapters so that it's easier to find your place when you have to restart your computer.

About slayers I think that it's inherent in the magic that creates them that they will be forever young and will only die violent deaths, otherwise they are immune to disease and old age.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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Any chance of seeing more of this universe. I love Buffy interaction with the Amazons.

Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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I still say this needs more to it. A sequel with a chance for happily ever after for Buffy. I also think Faith deserved a new love as well. I say if you go witht he Greek gods Ares for Buffy and maybe Poseiden for Faith. I think it be a great match. I mean if the gods could make Diana they should be able to make a child for Buffy right.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dhcalva
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Good Story, keep up the good work!
Review By [dhcalva] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Obsidian
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Awesome story. I loved it. Thanks
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grd
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Reread this excellent tale again and still moved by the various things that happened. I hope you continue to write more. Buffy and Dawns relationship with Queen Hippolyta needs to further explored.
Review By [grd] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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Any chance of getting a sequel for this piece. I know I have asked before but this is a great idea and it should be explored more soon.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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