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Xander's Not-So-Ordinary Patrol

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Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Netchka
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Like it. Xander needs a friend to keep him company on patrols, right? A largeish dragon would sure fit that bill.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Duquette
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This is wonderful, an original Xander concept that just screams with potential.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Hanzo
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MORE PLEASE
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from firedrakegirl
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YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS!!! It's awesome!!!! I'd love to see what happens with a Dragon on the Hellmouth!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from CelebwenTelcontar
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Please continue! What does Xander do with the egg? Who bonds to the dragonet? What's its name?

CT
Review By [CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Blackguard
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Great story. Hope more will come someday soon.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from SwimmieTeam
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Ummm I like the writing
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from ArrancarMaiden
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Yeah, I like it. Should totally continue with it. Great job.
Review By [ArrancarMaiden] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Dragonelf
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I hope you get inspired to add more chapters to this story even though you have marked it as complete.

::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrots while looking cautiously at the cliffhanger::

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I should warn you that underneath
these clothes I'm wearing boxer
shorts and I know how to use them.
- Robert Orben
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Nomma
Review:
Good start.
Review By [Nomma] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from HeatherSin
Review:
I was sifting through the responded Challenges and tripped across yours.

I really liked your first chapter. It was very reminiscent of the first book in ways and got me yearning for more. And sadly there probably wont be and Eragon 2 film since the first was such a flop. So I must call upon you, young scribe, to continue on your quest through this tale so slackers like us that haven't read enough of the books to do the story justice can live vicariously though your work.

Was that cheesy enough? Heh.

Anyway very good start with much potential. I hope your muse will peak her interest enough and saddle you with many ideas to go forward.

~H
Review By [HeatherSin] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Nightray
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I hope you do more a dragon in SunnyD would be cool.
Review By [Nightray] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Elleria
Review:
Very interesting...If you do intend to keep it up I would read it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from akpyro
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Definitely love it!
Review By [akpyro] • Date [7 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from iroshi
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Ooh, please do continue it. I'd love to see how Xander copes with a baby dragon. *grin*
Review By [iroshi] • Date [8 May 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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