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Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from Duquette
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Love the story, you just don't see good Ranma fics much these days, and I always thought that it was a great cross with Buffy.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from Chikageko
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...You never finnished. I'd put you on tracking but it doesn't really look like you're ever going to continue this one. Ohwell.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from Rune
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The idea the someone has to lose ki to power the Slayers is original. Your treatment of it is ok and I like that you have used it to change Ranma some. The only way Ranma has out of the honor trap he is in is a crossover. The change and growth of the characters is good. All you need to do is update this.
Review By [Rune] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from sinkun
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i really hope this isnt dead cuz its to good to let die
Review By [sinkun] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from TwoBlackDragons
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I've recommended this story because it's very well written and I hope the author finishes it. However anybody who is expecting light comedy because of the Ranma X-over will be disappointed.

Ranma is supposed to be a laugh riot not dark fantasy and dark fantasy is what this is.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from Rubel
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Cool well written. I really want to see where you are taking this. Not much else to say other than that.
Review By [Rubel] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from Nadrek
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This is one of the most interesting Buffy/Ranma crossovers I've seen. Generally well written, quite interesting, and the Ranma cast is well written. I don't know enough to characterize the Buffy cast.

'The world is older than you know' - yes, well, it's also far stranger than the Buffy folks know.
Review By [Nadrek] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from TDMaster
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I like this a lot and want to read more.
Review By [TDMaster] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Repost)" from superbrutal
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I was thinking that this chapter was different. But I really liked this one to, I'd say you made it even better.

I look forward to some more.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "Unwilling" from Difdi
Review:
Great story!

I'm wondering if the reason why the slayer package might act as a chi inhibitor...what if the powerup a slayer gets is a replacement of what they had naturally, rather than a multiplier or additive? It'd probably be easier from a magical power standpoint to simply transform a potential slayer into the slayer template, rather than simply add power; I can think of a few possibilities why this might be. Perhaps the Shadow Men never conceived of the possibility of a human being stronger than a slayer, or at least not a female being that way. Perhaps they decided they'd rather take a chance on weakening a strong potential than having a sick or crippled potential produce a sick or crippled slayer. Or maybe that's just how the magic fell out. In any event, if this is the case, no wonder Ranma is PISSED.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [17 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Unwilling" from Fasor
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A bit short chapter, but the story is great - i hope you write more :)
Review By [Fasor] • Date [11 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GaelicDragon
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You missed one point....

If Ranma has the Tendo Dojo sign, then Mr. Tendo can't teach anyone. Even though I am curious as to just why Ryouga would have the Tendo sign.

I wonder if Akane and Ukyo are even curious as to just why their ki might be coming back to them. Or were one of them not affected by the ki block. In earlier chapters, the author mentioned that only most of the female martial artists were affected by some strange spell.
Review By [GaelicDragon] • Date [2 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of story "Unwilling" from TealThanatos
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Added to tracking so I can keep watchin on this.
I'm liking it very much.
Review By [TealThanatos] • Date [2 May 07] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Unwilling" from superbrutal
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A short chapter but a good one, I'm looking forward to your next update.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [1 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Deadpan
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To add to my earlier review:

The idea behind this story is original, inventive, and fascinating. It has a great deal of potential. However, it also has a great deal of potential for plot holes and many of the characters seem to have changed significantly from when we last saw them in canon. The success or failure of this story will depend heavily on whether you can make the clash between chi training and the slayer magic work logically, and whether the reactions and attitudes of the characters are presented in a believable fashion.
Review By [Deadpan] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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