Cool idea to integrate Dawn into the X-men universe. The back story is very useful. Oma is being unusually helpful here, I guess because it is important that there are no misunderstandings. I'm sure Dawn wouldn't mind if Jon became her permanent champion and maybe she can convince him too:)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Cool fic, and you managed a rather nice blend of different 'Verses. Still, I don't really like the whole "Buffy-vers & Marvel/DC-verse crossover" thing. It just doesn't make sense, unless you remake the entire series from the beginning. Which, I might remark, I have yet to see... Still, cool little fic. Needs to be properly finished, though.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I just reread this story from the beginning - I think this is the third time - and it's stiff fascinating stuff. I love the characterizations, and the pacing is perfect.
Wow and...wow. This really is something. I would have never imagined something like this. Even if I'm not quite sure if I like the whole criminal-family thing I do like almost everything else. The story is very interesting and I can barely wait for the rest...which I'm hoping will come sooner or later. Please update, preferably soon!
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]