Ah, love your depiction of Ethan. There's a difference between chaos and chaos, much like the difference between Toltiir (Blessed be His name!) and the Ruinous Powers.
You get some minus points for the story being to short, but you make up for it with sheer funny in the end.
Comments from author:
I had no idea where to go after that actually. But I make it a point to never let plot blurbs sit in my head and fester. *grin*
As short as it was, it's an incident in that universe and had to be told.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Ah, love your depiction of Ethan. There's a difference between chaos and chaos, much like the difference between Toltiir (Blessed be His name!) and the Ruinous Powers.
You get negative for the story being to short, but you make up for it with sheer funny in the end.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Ok, I didn't think you could top the part where Q's car tried to mate with a Yugo, but you did it with this one. Xander dreaming about where the car gave birth to a baby BMW and Q breastfeeding it with a contraption to feed it oil was even better. Eagerly awaiting more. Sam
Review By [juniorsamples] • Date [16 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love this series, I love this Xander, and I want more please. I would like to see Buffy's and Willow's reactions to the bomb thing. Maybe that will make them realize that they don't know everything about their Xander-shaped friend.
Review By [DirectorLady] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I hope you can make a story that makes sense with this but, by God that was funny Thanks
Comments from author:
I should be able to. *grin* Already have an idea how to start number 2, but won't be able to get to it till this weekend.
as for the dream... believe it or not, the part with Q holding a wrapped car had me stumped for 6 months. that was the extent of the chapter. edit: It was also the plot bunny that gave me an idea for a new story in the series
Review By [LFW] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]