Wonder if she is gonna mention vamps to them... lol...
Review By [queenevil] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Much fun (loved the definition of the various kinds of SG1-generated headaches Gen. Hammond has experienced, for instance), and I hope there will be more updates in the not-too-distant future.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thanks for adding to the story. Looking forward to finding out if she's in her home dimension or if she exists in this one as an anolog.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One of these days, Alice... straight to the moon!" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I love this. The only part not clear is if she used physical skills to push the snake-head solder's or an "invisible force" to push them. Just a little more physical description woudl clear this up. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Ok, first this is a nice story and I'm going to track it.
Second, I think you're going a bit too fast. I feel you're leaving a little too much detail out. The whole escape from snake prison went far too quickly. Where was the danger? Where was the suspense? Ok maybe you wanted to get to the SGC part quickly but there was no explanation of how Danial and Sam got free. I also get the feeling that you might be using poor Willow as a 'super weapon' to cover up the plot-holes!
I hope I'm wrong.
As I say I did like the beginning enough to put a track on it so lets see where you're going with it!
All the best, DaveT.
Comments from author:
Well, this is new for me. If this were like most of my stories, Willow would have stood in prison staring at Jack and Teal'c and the cell for what reads like hours not saying anything and just noticing every insignificant detail before anything happened. And then Jack would have studied her for yet another eternity. I guess with this story I fell off the other end of the spectrum. I'll try to make my way back towards a happy medium, though.
Review By [DaveTurner] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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