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Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from azerjaban
Review:
my eyes started to get blurry at all the paragraphs explaining the dialog, but no actual dialog.
Review By [azerjaban] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from BillieBog
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Just found this and really hope you get back to it. It is a great start.

Thanks
BB
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Love it, you really got everyone written very well. Love Carters babble fest at the end!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from queenevil
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Wonder if she is gonna mention vamps to them... lol...
Review By [queenevil] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from RevDorothyL
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Much fun (loved the definition of the various kinds of SG1-generated headaches Gen. Hammond has experienced, for instance), and I hope there will be more updates in the not-too-distant future.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from Bunney
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lol, cute! i totally loved that she made an alien.

later and love
bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from VillageOrchid
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Thanks for adding to the story. Looking forward to finding out if she's in her home dimension or if she exists in this one as an anolog.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One of these days, Alice... straight to the moon!" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I love this. The only part not clear is if she used physical skills to push the snake-head solder's or an "invisible force" to push them. Just a little more physical description woudl clear this up. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from pezgirl
Review:
cool (:
thanks for the update
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Ok, first this is a nice story and I'm going to track it.

Second, I think you're going a bit too fast. I feel you're leaving a little too much detail out. The whole escape from snake prison went far too quickly. Where was the danger? Where was the suspense? Ok maybe you wanted to get to the SGC part quickly but there was no explanation of how Danial and Sam got free. I also get the feeling that you might be using poor Willow as a 'super weapon' to cover up the plot-holes!

I hope I'm wrong.

As I say I did like the beginning enough to put a track on it so lets see where you're going with it!

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Well, this is new for me. If this were like most of my stories, Willow would have stood in prison staring at Jack and Teal'c and the cell for what reads like hours not saying anything and just noticing every insignificant detail before anything happened. And then Jack would have studied her for yet another eternity. I guess with this story I fell off the other end of the spectrum. I'll try to make my way back towards a happy medium, though.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from link
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You updated! Let Carter have fun puzzling the magic out. I feel sorry for Hammond though. Strange things keep happening to SG1.
Review By [link] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from mithrilandtj
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Poor Willow.
Scientists are SO bothersome sometimes.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from dugleikoo
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Paranoid Sam, she can be slightly annoying at times.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What-kenesis?" from RoiDanton
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Really, really cool.

I I love it.

Bye
Review By [RoiDanton] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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