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Review of chapter "End" from deathgeonous
Review:
Very nice fic here. Very touching as well. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from Ansku
Review:
Touching :)
Comments from author:
Thnk you! Glad you liked
Review By [Ansku] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from Beth
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I absolutely love this fic. You write it so well. It seems so real in a way. Wish I could write like this. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
tHANK YOU, i find that sometimes a good song or a certain area in my house helps me write, you should give it a try you may surprise yourself.

Thanks for reading

Ali
Review By [Beth] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from deathgeonous
Review:
Good story. Sorta sad and sorta sweet at the same time. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from Caminus
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First, I'd like to say you've that got a very fun writing style and that the series has been a joy to read so far. I also originally had a lot to say about Faith's Slayer abilties (most notably regeneration) being gimped, but since it looks like the Slayer wasn't meant to live in the Anitaverse anyway, and since Faith now has her combat goodness back, that isn't as much of an issue. I think it might have been better to leave her with the Slayer though (perhaps with its combat ability buffed to alpha-were levels), so she could have been more unique with Cordy and Willow. I always sorta liked the idea of a Slayer in the Anitaverse, if only because all those bloody Vampires are so overconfident :P

On a last note, her knee should have been completely healed by shifting (or even by her slayer abilties long before, if they weren't all on-the-fritzy). Not to mention random stuff like broken arms from falling maybe six feet off the monkey bars. Her offensive powers are decidedly mediocre compared to Cordy and Willow, at least let her be durable. There are multiple examples in Anitaverse canon showing much worse than some nerve damage completely healed by shifting, and also of absolutely INSANE durability for dominant wereanimals.
Comments from author:
i thought i answered ur comment a LONG time ago but i can now see i did not, i am ashamed cause i did meant o answer u. The nerve thing-in one of the anita books it takes into account a injury richard sustained that was so close to his nerves that if he didn't shift within the quickness it would heal wrong, and he'd be damaged. because of the drugs in faith's system her healing abilities were retardedly slow, by time they got her out she had taken so much damage in that knee that it wouldnt be fixed all the way. she didnt break her arm in this story i dont think...i remember one of them breaks an arm in one of my other fics...but reason for that is, landing incorrectly even with abilities of the non human could cause damage, but u are right. but she is getting stronger and i do plan on her being 100 percent by time Down Come the Rain is posted (That's the next installment, they are in high school...not out yet). so worry not, she will have an INSANE durability as she gets older, let's not forget her dad is a vampire and her other dad is a were leopard not to mention her MOM, inherited powers don't usually pop up till puberty...it's what im waiting for.lol thanks for writing.

Ali
Review By [Caminus] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from Obsidian
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Wow you have got tallent. This story just touched my heart. It was great.
Thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from smolder
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*sigh* That was lovely......I think you ended it very well.
Review By [smolder] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from Darksidhe
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I love this series. This is one of the best blends of BtVS and the Anita Blake worlds that I have ever read, and I can't wait to get started on "Willow Bends".
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Run away Love" from smolder
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Awww!!! I dont know what else to say.............just awww!!!!
Review By [smolder] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run away Love" from unicornzvi
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I really like this story and this was a very powerful chapter. However I did find some of the stuff out of place. The bigest thing was Faith asking Anita if she thought Faith's actions made her a bad person without telling Anita about the accidental killing of the Deputy mayor and all the mess that followed that. I'm not saying she would reveal that but I don't see her asking that question if she hadn't.

Additionally her descriptions of her initial abuse fit how a 5 or 6 y/o child would describe them but later on she's describing things as I'd expect a teenager or older person would.

Also unless her friend Bobby also acted as her protector Faith would have had one or more guys who protected her in school in exchange for favors and unless atypicall she'd have fooled herself into believing they were her friends.

The Unicorn
Comments from author:
Perhaps as she got deeper into describing she started to talk as she would as an adult because her thoughts were adult...i', saving teh telling of the killing and stuff. Anita just asked about her childhood and she already knows some of what happened in Sunnydale from Long the Bridges, i don't think Faith had many friends, i think she had ppl who did favors for her and ppl she did favors for. Thank you for your thoughts :)

Ali
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who isn't will be who is" from CPTSkip
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And let me add to that "damn" and raise you a "what the hell?" Great story, I can't wait to see what happens next. But does this mean Buffy from their original universe died? Actually, I think Faith will make a cool cat. Lol!
Comments from author:
Youre so great, lol. remember how buffy died season one and the power passed? Onto Kendra who thrwe it to Faith, the power has to keep moving, Buffy already died so even if she died again there would be no power to pass down...so it has to be taken from Faith, make sense? Thanks for reading!

Ali
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who isn't will be who is" from grd
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My vote is for Faith to remain a Slayer too. Faith as a wereleopard just does not seem right. If her Slayer and were could combine that would be very cool, and unique too. In this world where monsters still exist, how dare they say that a Slayer is not needed. Just because monsters have rights does not make some of them any less than a monster. PTB a-holes.
Comments from author:
i didnt want to make her both cause then shed be like unstoppable, and her being in another universe kinda put the slayers in the btvs world on hold, cause she had the power, they needed it back so really she couldnt keep it not to mention the reason for her were was because in order to land in that universe, essence from ppl around them at the time was used to create them in that verse-do u get me? like they already had a willow and faith, so the ptb had to alter their dna just a little so that the balance woudlnt be disrupted. her were came from Micah, and seing as it's a dominant it coudlnt live with anotehr dominant-get me? lol i havent even had a chance to explain it in my fic yet. lol

Ali
Review By [grd] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who isn't will be who is" from amusewithaview
Review:
*Dances* Faith is SUCH a kitty-cat! YAY!

Danke for the story, would love to see more Willow+Vamps and more Delia being... well: Delia!
Comments from author:
Look out for 'Only Willows Bend' the next installment for the family series *smiles*

Ali
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Behind Brown Eyes" from Twoboots
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I love this! The only problem is, every time I read an update, I come out of it already impatient for the next one!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I see you" from smolder
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I really adore this little world you have made. Very good chapter, it all has so much feeling in it...........you make me feel sympathetic for Faith without making the story overwelmingly angsty.
The only thing I have to complain about is that I miss Willow. I know shes there but out of the three you seem to concentrate alot on Faith. I hope you do a Willow-centric story after this one........do you think you might go back to that one you abandoned.....I think it was called Down Came the Rain.......or something like that.
Comments from author:
this one is a faith centric one, lol. i am also working on a willow centric as well as one mainly on Delia. I wanted to give the readers more insight to how the girls were adjusting and answer a few unanswered questions. as for down came the rain i'm not sure. i took it down and had it saved so i could add more instead of just having it on the site losing readers and my computer crashed and the story was deleted so i have to start over.
Review By [smolder] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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