Great story so far, but one this stands out like a sore thumb: A British ex-Librarian not knowing the Harry Potter books. I'm sorry, that just isn't realistic. Giles knowing the books as fiction, or thinking the Scoobies are kidding makes sense (and I'm going to assume that "Giles doesn't know Harry Potter" means that Giles doesn't know any Buffyverse group that is the Harry Potter world), but Giles having never heard of the series does not.
Beyond that it's a great story so far, and I like how you made Faith a secret reader.
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Is this actually complete? It is not marked as such, but it's been a while and it could be, with an abrupt ending that is. Well either way, thanks for writing this, bye for now. PS, if this is not complete, could you finish it? Should only take a few more chapters, if that.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Please write more if you are NOT finished. if you ARE finished put that you are finished.
Comments from author:
Wow, what a wonderful and thoughtful review. Thank you for telling me what you liked and/or disliked about the story and not being a pretentious ass with your expectations about what I should or shouldn't do with MY story. If, in the future, I decide that I don't want to write anything more, I'LL make the decision on how to label it.
If you don't like to read incomplete stories then I would suggest not reading stories that aren't labeled 'complete'. It's quite simple.
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [26 Sep 09] • Not Rated