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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
This was good, I just wish there was a chance of seeing it continued.

Cheers!
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Traveler
Review:
A shame that this story has been left alone for so long. This has an interesting premise and I hope someday the author sees fit to finish it. Thanks for sharing what you did write.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Telmah
Review:
intriguing! I would love to see more! Interesting twist making Drusilla an agent of Chaos and champion of a somewhat benevolent? Janus!
Review By [Telmah] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HolyKnight
Review:
Update, WHEN!?
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [27 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very interesting and imaginative.

I'm eagerly looking foreword to more!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from zafaran
Review:
More, please. I think this is only the second time I've seen this particular crossover, but this is a very interesting interpretation, and I'd like to see more of this and find out what happens next. I'm glad Janus chose Dru as his Seer and healed the damage that Angelus had caused before he turned her. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)Qbast
Review:
Nice to see some fresh ideas and solid execution. Especially using Drusilla and Dalton as parts (seer and research guy?) of this new group of champions. I don't remember any story that puts them to good use.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Qbast] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from rothos
Review:
Thats actually Rule #1 Do not write at home on a futon, Rule #2 is disregard that rule if under duress such as over 18 credits of coursework, sick and the list goes on and on.
But to the point of this review. Good story, not that familiar with the crossover.
Review By [rothos] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Didn't the scene with the jock happen just before Halloween?

Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Since Xander did not run into Pirate Larry on Halloween, I figured he was the best way to showcase Dawn's new skills. Because as effective as her strike was, she did it in front of a room full of people and got away with it.

Thanks for the feedback.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LFW
Review:
Dru is filling out well as a true character
And what a nice piece of Chaos by Dru leaving just before Buffy appears
Looking forward to more
Comments from author:
I must admit, I am enjoying tweaking Buffy's nose in this fic. Part of her problem later on was that she thought that since she was The Slayer, she was always Right. In this story, not only is she not always Right, she's not that observant. :)

Thanks for the feedback.
Review By [LFW] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Cali
Review:
THANK YOU GOD!!!! You're Back! Good job. Hopefully in the next chapter add Xander and Dawn doing their own hunting and fighting. Otherwise very good job. To get a 10 you have to finish and hopefully lengthen the chapters.
Comments from author:
The Fratellos must relearn to walk before they start sprinting. Imagine what will happen if Dawn gets hurt fighting - Buffy may very well dismember Xander.

Thanks, hope to put out more chapters soon.
Review By [Cali] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)kcl
Review:
I'd like to commend you as this fic has evolved into much more than I originally expected. I particularly like how Drucilla has become Xander and Dawn's 'guide' (for want of a better term). I'm really looking forward to where you take this. Good job!
Comments from author:
If you think Drusilla as Xander and Dawn's Seer is fun, wait until we get into Angel becoming their close combat instructor. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)kcl] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from mithrilandtj
Review:
This is an interesting story.
I like that Janus took an extra interest in the Key.

It woulda helped though if you'd mentioned at the begining of the story *which* manga this is.
I had to do a search just to come up with Gunslinger Girls.
(not everybody knows or watches Manga)
Comments from author:
I figured since the Powers That Be and the Infernal Powers could have have their Champions, Chaos should as well. And since Janus is the Roman God of Chaos...

And I did mention the GSG in the disclaimer in the first chapter. Wikipedia is always good to look up new characters and anime/mangas.

Thanks to all the people that have reviewed. Now that I have found a better place to write, hopefully I'm put out chapters faster.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
This is a nice story. I love fics giving Dawn some focus, and it's nice to see Dru being given a fair shake, too.

I'd also like to compliment you on your writing skills. No notable errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation. "Hurray!" for readable prose!
Comments from author:
One of my pet peeves in fan fic is people who don't remember they have a spellcheck on their word processor.

Of course, I take it a bit to far in the other direction. My teen characters start sounding like Giles. :)

Thanks for the feedback.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Robby
Review:
GREAT work!! Keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Robby] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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