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Review of chapter "Decisions, Decisions" from Lin
Its an interesting take on Chase's past...but i'm really not getting the feeling that its Chase saying it if that makes sense. It seems like it could be any one saying it...try to bring a little bit more personality into it...something that will make the reader go "man, thats gotta be Chase"
Review By [Lin] • Date [3 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions, Decisions" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Excellent bit of back history. Well done.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions, Decisions" from link
I really enjoyed this story. You managed to include details like Chase becoming a priest and why he bail out to become one outstanding story. You are brilliant! Would you consider writing a sequel? Like Chase meet Buffy and maybe helping the injured slayers after the whole Sunnydale collapse thing.
Comments from author:
thank you, thank you very much. :)) i don't think i'm gonna write a sequel though... i don't think i'd have the energy and creativity for something like that. *grin* but again, thanks for the review. :D
Review By [link] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions, Decisions" from Marita
Pretty damn awesome!!! Really love it. Especially the character development.
Comments from author:
thanks. :D :))
Review By [Marita] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions, Decisions" from Marcel
I liked how you brought in Caleb as an explanation of why Chase dropped out of seminary... good idea.

As for "END" - if this is the end, shouldn't you mark the story as complete? And in that case, I must admit that I am disappointed with the story... I was hoping you were actually working up to a crossover, this looks too much like "it stopped just as it was about to begin". It wasn't necessarily bad as much as... well, not really anything. It's kinda like those things they make you read in school - who cares that James was really in love with Jenny but she didn't love him back and he was really suffering and... you get the idea. There is no "meat", which is worse than no spoon [grin].
Comments from author:
thank you for taking the time to review and thanks for sharing your opinion. :D i am also very sorry that i disappointed you... :(... but then again, the point of my story was how and why Chase chose to be a doctor... and also, i don't think they ever made me read that kind of story in school. :)) if they did, i can't remember or maybe not yet. *grin* but like I said, THANK YOU for reviewing and for giving constructive criticism. :D and i'm not being sarcastic, i really mean that. *grin*
Review By [Marcel] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perhaps a Watcher" from Marcel
Very good start... I'm curious which members of BtVS/AI you're going to bring over to the House universe. (I *love* House so I love a new House crossover.)
Comments from author:
thanks. :D just so you know, i hate to disappoint but this is fic is Chase-centric so i'm only bringing/brought one character who influenced his life... however, thanks for the review and i hope you enjoy the rest of the fic. :D (first review!!! yay!!! hahaha. :D)
Review By [Marcel] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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