Great story with a difficult plot to write well, and you did. Thank you for balancing a truly Henry and Mike moment with hotness, conflict and all the rest.
Bravo.
Comments from author:
Thank you NomadBeth,
Neichan and I appreciate you taking the time to send such a lovely comment. We worked hard on keeping this story true to the characters personalities and still making it believable. I am glad you enjoyed the story.
Hugs,
Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
This is such a great story. Great writing and I love Vicky in it, her character is very cool-headed. It's interesting the way you can see the growth of Mike and Henry's relationship. Such a well written story, can't wait for more. ~Sammie~
Comments from author:
Thank you Sammie, I am glad you are enjoying the story. Neichan and I worked hard on making the relationship between Mike and Henry develop slowly. It was fun to write. Thank you for letting us know that our hard work was appreciated. Hugs,
Review By [xanderfan] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Mike's obvious difficulty in accepting the changes in himself, his life, and his yearning are sad. Henry's desire for Vicky is multi-faceted but overshadowed by his cravings for Mike. Nicely conveyed.
Overall a very sensual chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you Purrfus,
It was a difficult chapter to write. For a long time it just wouldn't come together. I am glad that Neichan and I finally got it right.
Hugs,
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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