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Executioner, Say Hello to The Destroyer

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tals
Review:
Interesting idea. Has a lot of potential. However I get annoyed when I reach a new section - using words as a demarcation line between section is confusing; I'm just wondering why it suddenly says "ConnorAngel" instead use ----- or *-*-*- or ~~~~~ or :::::: or whatever else you find aesthaetically pleasing.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
I really like this so far, i like how Connor is having to deal with many ascepts of himself, and the way The Destroyer part of him is brought into it makes me think that if Anita did go up against Connor she would loose. Big time. LOL! I really would like to see Dean, Nina and Sam come into this at some point and we can see their thoughts on Connor, Dean's would be very funny and insightful. Please update soon, it would be a shame not to continue this story.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Mezek
Review:
I really like this story! I don't suppose you'll be updating it anytime soon?
Review By [Mezek] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Christy
Review:
interesting concept, but it's WAY off base plot wise when it comes to Anita. A little advice- let the story explain what's going on instead of going the easy way out and explaining it all away in an author's note...and as for Richard- he can always transfer to a different school, ya know.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the advice. Yeah i realized that after i posted the author's note. If you're willing could you beta for me? It would help me a lot.
Review By [Christy] • Date [29 Apr 07] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from KarlStahl
Review:
Good beginning. I like how you deal with the different memory sets. I wonder what will become of Connor and Gunn in this universe.
Comments from author:
thanks. :)
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [23 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
very interesting. Has good potential. A little problem with word usage, but a beta could help with that. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [21 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Can't wait to see where you will go with this!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting start. Curious to read more.

(BTW: in the books Richard teaches Junior High science, not High School.)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Interesting.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zili
Review:
interesting angle pretty good start
Review By [zili] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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