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Review of chapter "The Truth Will Set You Free" from supernaturalfanatic
That was horrible. And by horrible, I mean how the demon got Dean to lose such powerful allies!
Story-wise.. Loved it! That evil, evil, demon!

And yes, this could totally work as just a one-shot, but having Dean really meet Buffy would be amazing!
Comments from author:
You know, I think this may be one of the first times I've been happy with a review that told me it was horrible! lol! Thank you.

I'm glad I can write the evil... I just couldn't do it every week. ;)

Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Truth Will Set You Free" from nicowa
Very good fic. I thought you had played up the blonde cheerleader part of Buffy a bit much and also how anybody who could stay awake for twentyfour hours listening to all that is strange. But of course that could have been part of the magic of the spell. I loved the ending, such a twist and it really works. I'd love a sequel where he meets the real Buffy Summers but that would of course go beyond what this fic needs. (and to into the whole critical analysis bit) good writing style and pacing, keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thank you. :)

On playing up the cheerleader side of things I'd like to say that firstly, that's Dean's point of view of the situation... and once you get to the end you realise that this isn't her in control... I wanted Buffy seeming a little out of sorts for when the end comes, so that the reader knows something's a little off and then the twist comes...

I think that if either of those two (and the YED playing Buffy) were stuck in that sort of situation with an unknown that neither of them would sleep on the off chance that something would happen.

The ending came first when I saw the challenge and it all came from there.

Not sure on a sequel, these things are usually one offs, but I've learnt never to say never ;)

Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it. Also, thank you for the great review. :D

Review By [nicowa] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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