Hey. It was a great starting prologue, despite what some of the other reviewers said. I think Xander and Ichigo would get alone quite well. I really hope there will more to come, especially how Xander finds the sword, for him it probably will hurt and be by accident. Please continue, Ill be sure to read and review!!
Review By [ROGMethos] • Date [27 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
He jammed it into the rock 'handle first'? If the hilt was in the rock, the blade was sticking out. If Xander finds it, he will probably do so by being skewered on it.
Review By [sistercity] • Date [12 Apr 07] • Not Rated
I fix the blank line problem by running the text through notepad before putting it into the chapter-box. *shrug* Someone probably has a better way. Could you also get the made-for-email column back into page-width? It doesn't distract anything, just a pet peeve of mine.