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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Elleria
Review:
Is good.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [29 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ForTheJoy
Review:
Love this! Especially love the Ron POV--likable and funny, but not outrageously OOC.

Well, off to read the sequel!
Review By [ForTheJoy] • Date [21 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Javian
Review:
Fun. And I've definitely felt that 'not-knowing if stuff is interesting/in-character after writing for a while' thing, but this fic was very nicely done. :)
Review By [Javian] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This story was quite nice. thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from banner
Review:
That was fun! And very in character for Ron and Harry...
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [banner] • Date [27 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Jalimar
Review:
Great work. I really liked the story. And I think being from Rons POV made it better. Excellent job on the fight between Buffy and Harry, really liked it. Maybe the sequel could be from one of the iclkle slayers POV. Good job anyways, hope for a sequel.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review
Review By [Jalimar] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from peachy
Review:
This was so cool! Great POV, the story was good but it took a backseat to the excellent narration, which really made it great. And also some excellent lines. We'll see more soon maybe?
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!

Possibly in the next week or so, but I'm not promising anything as a miracle might happen and I'll be employed and won't have 12 uninterrupted hours to just *write*.
Review By [peachy] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from physicsteach
Review:
This story is very well-written, and the singular best example of first-person storytelling in fanfic that I've read.

Having said that, the pacing of chapters six and seven was a bit forced - not horribly so, and there was a sense of Ron being caught up in events without the time to process that only could have worked in the first-person, but still so much went on in two chapters that it seemed a bit forced.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much.

Chapters Six and Seven come from a place I like to call, "I Thought Writing A Ron POV Meant I Could Get Out Of Battle Scenes, Whoops". I didn't like how they turned out, either (I literally just woke up and said, "Where's Harry when Ron's being tortured?"

At a later point I'll probably go back and clean them up, but right now I don't wanna look at the thing for at least a day or two. I really appreciate your comments.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from adoxerella
Review:
I absolutely adore your Ron POV. Heck, I absolutely adore the whole story, and if it wasn't 6:30 on a Saturday morning, I could be a heck of a lot more articulate about it. Thanks for sharing this.
Comments from author:
Aww, thank you from 8am on Saturday morning!
Review By [adoxerella] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MistofRainbows
Review:
It was interesting. A bit strange coming from Ron's point of view. Most interesting still. The grammar and maybe the flow needs some touch ups but hey still interesting.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I didn't sit down and say, "I'm going to write a story from Ron's POV", it just came out that way. And no sane person argues with their muse. It'll be going for some cleanup when I can look at it again, right now I hates it, preciousss.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We Like Walking Into Traps" from arkeus
Review:
hum...nice so far, though ron isn't my favorite character :/
Comments from author:
Thank you. I think.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from link
Review:
Thank god you're gonna do a sequel. I need my Xander! And Andrew. And Giles....You finish this in one sitting? Wow, you're good. Looking forward to the sequel. May they all live happily ever after.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I need Xander, too *squooshes Xander*. It wasn't so much one sitting, as one day sitting around the house.

And in my world, they always live happily ever after. When I'm done torturing them. Ehehehehee. :D
Review By [link] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""You Made My Mum Cry, You Bastard"" from physicsteach
Review:
Wonderful start. Couple misspellings (stoup in Ch. 2, for example, instead of stoop), but well-written otherwise. I have to say that I'm not usually a big fan of first-person stories, even from my favorite authors, but you got me hooked, despite that, right away with the warm, wry humor you're using. The 'say whatever will make her make happy' line was just brilliant, and I'm eagerly and impatiently waiting for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'll go back and fix that (I doubt Grimmauld Place has a holy water stoup big enough for Slayers to stand in out front :S )
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""You Made My Mum Cry, You Bastard"" from Mcspender
Review:
So, Harry wants a big BBQ. Too bad he forgot the meat and all the other things :S.
Comments from author:
I think Phineas was baiting him. But still, what damn fool burns down the house you're living in?

...oh, yes, right, him.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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