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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
6.

poor Buffy...not a good way to be told who your father is.

7.

hehe poor Buffy having to spent time in the hospital :



8.

good the trio followed her and damn Lucy got away again.

9.

good Harry asked her and Buffy agreed...now we have to see Voldys plans.....

10.

good Draco warned them...and Angelus back....what a shame

11.

yeah no plan survives enemy contact ...good Spike and Dru are dead and I guess Angel will get
quite a shock soon
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1.

interesting start...and poor Buffy being the daughter of Tommyboy.

2.

Dumblebee....rofl....
good Buffy called Giles for help

3.

good Xander, Willow and Joyce took that all so well....good have become quite nasty

4.

good the shopping trip is over and she is in Griffindor

5.

nice first meeting with the Hogwarts crew
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from tigerluv
Review:
I really like this story, I hope you update soon and haven't abandoned it.
Review By [tigerluv] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from myfandomneedstherapy
Review:
I definately love you're story and I can't wait for the next chapter and I think the prophesy is very cool. And I can't wait for the wedding, maybe there is a reason why she is still alive after the killing curse? that would be awsome.
anyway you're really good and I can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [myfandomneedstherapy] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from FireWolfe
Review:
Exellent story. I hope it is updated. I just spent the last couple of hours reading it and I have to say it wonderful. I am saddened by Joyce but it is still great. More when you can. It has a lot of potenital.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great story I hope it is not abandoned?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
i just got all caught up!! YAY! anyways...i love this story! i really want to know how she survived. i mean i see that you had to have both Buffy and Siruis survive. (sorry if i mis spelled). i cant wait for their wedding!!!!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
i just got all caught up!! YAY! anyways...i love this story! i really want to know how she survived. i mean i see that you had to have both Buffy and Siruis survive. (sorry if i mis spelled). i cant wait for their wedding!!!!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from winnie
Review:
good story, exciting, and moving right along. Looking forward to more soon, please.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for you kind words and your support in reading my story. I have the next chapter almost completed but I am not sure if my readers are going to like it. I need to find somebody that would read it first to see what they think. Thanks again for your support and I'm sorry it is taking so long.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [winnie] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Awesome update!! More more more please ;)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. You are one of my most loyal readers and I love you for that. In fact I was wondering if you would like to read over my next chapter before I post it, not really to beta but to tell me what you think of it. I think it might not be appreciated by some of my readers and I need somebody to read it before I post it to see if I should throw it away and start over in a different direction or if it is worth posting for my next chapter. Also, I am not sure if this chapter should be rated FR21 or if FR18 is still okay for it. You certainly don't have to read over it for me if you don't want to but I would appreciate it. Again I'm not looking for somebody to beta it just to tell me if it should be posted or not. If you wouldn't mind then you can send me a private comment with your email or does this site have just plain private message that I could send it to you through? Let me know and thanks for all your support.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Goddess! That was good! Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review and just thanks for reading my story. It makes me feel good that people actually like my story. I have a chapter almost done that I hope to post in the next week or so. After I find somebody to read it for me and I edit it some. Thanks again and I hope you have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from MaverikSummers
Review:
Wow. Just wow.

At first it kind of reminded me of A Murderer's Daughter, but then it became something else and I was glad.

I didn't like that Harry and Buffy got together so quickly but I guess it was mandatory.

I really hope that you update soon! I can't wait to see when Harry and Buffy get married. Little blonde-haired green-eyed babies would not be remiss either.
Comments from author:
I am glad you like my story. It's funny I loved 'A Murderers Daughter' it's funny how peoples taste differs, but I bet we have a lot of stories we like in common :). I know that Harry and Buffy getting together was kind of quick, though I figured it was a month in a half or so after school started so... I don't know but it made the story work better so I had to do it, though it bothers me too so you aren't the only one. I think the wedding is going to be in the next couple of chapters so hopefully not too much longer to wait. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [MaverikSummers] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Hi. I have been reading this story ever since you started writing it, and I like it very much. It’s an interesting read, with a lot of entertaining scenes and plot twists. In the last couple chapters there’s been one tiny grammar error that’s been bugging me to death though. You keep calling Buffy Harry’s fiancé. That’s the masculine spelling. There is actually a difference. The feminine of a person who is affianced is fiancée. So sentences like “Harry swung his fiancé into his arms.” look weird in my head, because I read so fast that I literally see the action of the written word as if I were watching it happen firsthand. Imagine experiencing something very interesting that absorbs all your attention, and then suddenly tripping over a rock that literally appeared out of thin air.
Ok, slightly rambling explanation of why gender agreement in nominatives is important aside, I do really like this story, and hope to see more soon. Thank you for posting this chapter of this fun, funny, and poignant by turns fic. Happy writing, and I’ll be watching for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate you pointing that out to me and I will fix it in future chapters. When I get some extra time I will fix the prior chapters. I really am glad you like the story it is nice to get criticism that will improve my writing and still know that the read likes my story. Thanks again and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from immortalwizardelffan
Review:
Methinks Voldemort's gonna kill wittle Bewwa for nearly killing his daughter... even if it had been by accident.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment and I hope you like the story and like the future chapters. Thanks again and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from saqqara
Review:
please update soon, love this story x
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I will try to update as soon as I can. Thanks again and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [saqqara] • Date [6 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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