Review By [serenityselena] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Negotiations" from lamusicalady
Review:
I've read this maybe 10 times, and every time i'm completely happy with it. You do a good job of not exhaustively spelling everything out, but letting the reader draw some conclusions.
Review By [lamusicalady] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
OMG i LOVE this little one shot and now i'm going to be running to your profile to see if you've written more... and if you haven't written more//// WHY NOT?! hehe, kudos! job well done!
Comments from author:
Sorry, no more has been written in this universe. I might add some drabbles/ficlets in the future, but too many other plot bunnies are multiplying in my brain right now. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Review By [Drusilla] • Date [22 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Loved it! Oh, and loved the quote: “Dear, God. You're going to kill each other,” complained McKay, earning a fond smile from Teyla.
I enjoyed the premise of the story and the characterizations; including Faith's names for the team. :)
I would definitely read a continuation if the mood strikes you to write it. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comments from author:
This was my first time writing Faith, and I enjoyed it. I have vague ideas for a sequel, but nothing much. We'll see what happens. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
I'm just going to jump on the bandwagon, and say: loved the fight scene, loved the way you wrote Faith, loved the Hair comment, would love to see more!
Comments from author:
Well, I hope to write more - at least a quick 'Faith arrives in Atlantis' scene - but the plot bunnies are fat and lazy on that one. I had such fun writing that one, and I'm glad so many people enjoy it. Thanks. :)
Review By [rhiannon] • Date [14 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Lovely- I'm not at all familiar with the Atlantis crew, though. Does Teyla have super strength?
Comments from author:
Not particularly, though she is fast and strong, and in the first season, she took on a Wraith and didn't do too badly. I'm of the opinion that super strength doesn't make you the winner of a fight. It's about skill and ability, and Teyla has that, plus amazing reflexes and self-control. I could go on, but I'll just say 'Thanks'. :)
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [8 May 07] • Not Rated
I love this story Faith is a really strong character and I think her and Ronon probably have more in common then they know but I also think her and Teyla would make good friends, I really hope you plan to write a sequel to this with Faith fighting the wraith. Anyway good luck in future writing :)
Comments from author:
Thanks - I've discovered a liking for writing Faith, so there should be more of her in my future. Whether anything else is written in this universe, I'm thinking 'probably', but as of yet have no plot bunnies.
Review By [lexas] • Date [1 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
end?! but, but, that was such a great beginning! wonderful way you wrote faith
Comments from author:
Thanks. With all the wonderful reviews, I really want to write more in this universe, but all I have are short snippets of scenes in my head, no real fleshed-out ideas. Maybe soon. :)
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ooh, what a great piece! Very nicely written...Faith was spot on. The fight scene was great. I'm going to have to join the gaggle and say I'd love to see more in this vein.
Comments from author:
Geez, no pressure or anything. :) Glad you enjoyed it - more if I get some ideas.
FaithSummers
