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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from twlight
Review:
This is a wonderful story so far, I do hope that you decide to finish is some day.
Review By [twlight] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from LordSia
Review:
Come on, it's good, update!
Review By [LordSia] • Date [10 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from NaiveGhost
Review:
I like this, very interesting take. I hope you continue with it.
;-)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from hollywoude
Review:
I just found your story and I really hope your plan to continue it! I love it. Dark/Evil Harry is my favorite and with the support of the Dursleys...great idea. Please update again soon..pretty please. Wizarding world wont know what hit them. Keep up the great work!
Review By [hollywoude] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from spring
Review:
I love this fic so far. I think that it is wonderful, I really really hope that you plan to update this fic again sometime soon. Again I love this wonderful fic.
Comments from author:
Probably not on this website but if you go to fanfiction.net and look up Sio-99 there are more chapters there, although they are in bad need of a beta. leave a review behind you if you do end up checking them out ^_~

Thanks for the review

~Sio
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from Infinix
Review:
I was kind of wary about this idea at first because I ure it had any merit but if the rest of the story continues like ch2 I will have been proven wrong.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from Cutiepie
Review:
I can accept Harvey. That was one of my uncle's names. =]

I am puzzled why nobody seems to be questioning why "Harry Potter's" mail is being sent to the Dursley household. Harvey didn't even ask who this fellow was. I would think that they would treat it like any other misdelivered mail (writing "return to sender" or "not at this address" on it). Since it has been ten years or more since they have heard from the Potters, it even stands to reason that they wouldn't even recognize the name and make the connection. It seems more likely that there would be a huge pile of letters waiting on the sideboard to be sent "back" through the post office rather than having been burnt or whatever. After all, Vernon only burned the letter in the original story as a stab at Harry and the "evil" magic.

And, I think that Petunia would see Harvey having magic as vindication that she didn't. So maybe her sister was "special" and she felt left out, but now Petunia is just as special because of what her son can do. Which then makes me wonder: is Hyacinth going to have magic too? It could happen, even as a side effect of her being healed by "Har'ey," I'd think. That could be interesting. How would the (adult) Dursleys feel in having to rethink the whole magic thing? I doubt that they ever even mentioned it to the kids.
Comments from author:
The mail is sorta explained in the next chapter. Thank you for the review!
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from misterq
Review:
Very interesting premise - I like this AU - although I wonder exactly how big around Harvey is after living with the Dursleys.. With them feeding him and spoiling him like Dudley - at least he would know how to use computers and pop culture refrences that he wouldn't had he grew up in a cupboard...

As for BTVS vs. Hannibal... hmm.. Hannibal could be possessed by a demon or he could be just twisted enough and human to defeat a demon, despite Buffy wanting to slay him.

Good luck
Review By [misterq] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from Lin
Review:
I think i like it, though i have absolutly NO idea how to pronoiunce Harvey/Harry's sisters name.
I can't wait to see Petunias reaction to finding out that her "son" is really her nephew that she never would have wanted.
Review By [Lin] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from Angeldustedthatfreak
Review:
Yay, I liked this one very much but thought 'Harvey' was a very funny name. . And Rat poison? even I wouldn't stoop so low as that. Maybe you could of had 'Harvey' talk to the owls to get them to go away, but, whatever its your story. .
Review By [Angeldustedthatfreak] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from YademosEbyam
Review:
Harry ... Harvey ... has a little sister! How ... sweet! I hope she can help the Durselys overcome their hatred of the Wizarding World so they can support his destiny. All she has to do is tell them that his magic cured her. Even though they will never like magic, it would be nice if they decided to back him no matter what. Of course, being raised by people with those prejudices, he could decide to honour his "parent's" wishes and decline to attend Hogwarts. I look forward to see his decision.

BTW, a BtVS/Hannibal crossover should go under "Movies->Other-Drama" (category 2-1215) or "Movies->Other-Horror" (category 2-1216), depending on the degree Hannibal becomes involved with the occult.
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hospitals, Zoos, and Letters" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Okay. Interesting take, I like the new little sister and Harvey saving her. Very sweet.

I don't like how the letters are handled in this Chapter, seems like they're not asking questions...

I look forward to the next edition :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: In the begining there was an end" from Angeldustedthatfreak
Review:
Hey, this is actually interesting. . . behold my surprise. .
Comments from author:
Glad to be beholding!
Thanks for the review!
Sio
Review By [Angeldustedthatfreak] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: In the begining there was an end" from Cutiepie
Review:
I really like this beginning. I do think that I must now track it to see where you take it. =]

That said, I REALLY hope that you will avoid going the "slash" route. I abhor reading slash, and would have to stop following what now looks to be quite an enjoyable read. I would prefer that it not wind up being super "dark" either, but that isn't such a sticking point for me as the slash issue.

Also, in response to something said in another review, I certainly hope that you DON'T have Petunia and Vernon rename Harry "Dudley" but instead come up with something new. Looking forward to the next update!
Comments from author:
I am glad you like it. I wouldn't worry about the slash for a very long time (if it happens) I am not gonna slash eleven year olds (ewww). And lucky for you one of the reasons I am writing this is cause I found the original work a little to dark for my taste...thats not to say that there wont be some angst in the next few chapters.

As for Harry's name you'll just have to want and see....(Mwahahahahaha)
Thanks for reading ^.~
Sio
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: In the begining there was an end" from DigiEmissary
Review:
They're going to rename him Dudley, aren't they? "Dudley Dursley, The Boy Who Lived" just doesn't have the same ring to it. :p

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
I guess you'll just have to wait and see ;)

Thanks for the review
Sio
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [15 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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