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Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from maxthehobbit
Review:
I liked all three stories, but all three had bad things happen to them that still affect them in the present. Maybe one should have been a happy story ...

They were short and rather sad, but slayers in the Buffy verse don't really have happy endings.

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
This is one of those stories that sounded good in the development stage but on sober consideration should have been written differently (if at all). If I was writing this today I'd have put in some 'fun'. I think you can call this part of my 'Misery' period!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked all three stories. I thought it was neat how you based all three stories on the same song but none of the stories seemed to be copies of each other in any way. I really like the way you write Kennedy and Willow and even your Mini-Slayers come across as real people. I look forward to more episodes of your lovely series.
Comments from author:
Thanks as always for the review. More Seattle Slayers (longer and funnier) Soon!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Yes, very good. You successfully fulfilled that challenge nicely.

Nice to not see Kennedy getting bashed. You write Kennedy well actually.

Hmm, Alice the fifteen year old prostitute who could pick the Johns she chose and nobly resisted becoming a drug addict at thirteen. (Hey, BTW are you aware of the Romanian teen sex slaves in the UK at present? Ghastly)

It doesn't ring true somehow.

The first chapter is great.
Comments from author:
This was only after she'd Killed her Pimp!

Yes the drug thing might be a bit heard to believe, but I did say she drank too much and smoked some 'weed'.

I think you get the prize for first review! Well done, it's in the post now!

I've been away for two weeks and I seem to have lost the ability to type!

All the best,
DaveT
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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