Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ShieldageReview:
Well plotted :D
Nice, self-contained story exploring a theme. Works great as a stand-alone type episode in an ongoing series. In other words, excellent work at making this feel like an hour of tv rather than a chapter torn at random from the middle of a book.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Most of my stories seem so random so it's good to hear that it makes sense as it is.
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DeepBlueJoyReview:
wow
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [
DeepBlueJoy] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
amusewithaviewReview:
*Sighs* Love. Absolutely love.
Danke
Comments from author:
I rather like this one, even though it breaks my little fan-girl heart to think he's had meaningless flings. However, it was inevitable that something like this would come up with them both. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [
amusewithaview] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
