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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I hate it when you do a great start and then don't update.

Please finish the story!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Sayko
Review:
Aw, men. Do you know it, when you read a fucking good story and want to read further? and you know it, when this story is abandoned? Whyyy would you do something so cruel to us?

So i really like your story, would be great if you decide to update.

Greets,
Wermops.
Review By [Sayko] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Kittysgotclaws
Review:
Hi. I know it's been a long time since you updated this, but I really like this story and really hope that you will start writing more of it again.. cheers
Review By [Kittysgotclaws] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Wow! Really good! Can't wait for more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from WolfWriter
Review:
I like this story. When are we going to see more of it?
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Lin
Review:
I'm torn, i like the story, its well written and interesting, but i'm just having trouble believing it.
You have Buffy's personality down....but buffy is supposed to be a grown up version of hermionie...and i thought that i would see a little bit of her by the second chapter. I just don't see any of the "insuffurable know it all" in there at all.

On another note, did joyce die in your version during the crucimen(i'm not even going to try to attempt to finsih spelling that)
But the test in season 3 (maybe 2?) where tehy gave buffy a drug to render her powerless?
(speaking of, i'm wondering now why some demons didn't invest in that drug)
Review By [Lin] • Date [3 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Cutiepie
Review:
I'm sorry, but this is totally not working for me at all.

In making Buffy the same person as Hermione, you are making ALL of BTVS an AU, not just after season 3, because you eliminated the back-story (Hemery High and burning down the gym, etc). I haven't seen a single thing that would make me believe that "bookworm" Hermione would be able to change into "ex-social butterfly" Buffy, or even want to for that matter. Actually, I haven't seen Hermione at all. It's just been Buffy so far. A person can't sublimate a personality so completely without it being either an act (which will slip eventually) or a result of mental illness (multiple personality disorder, for instance). What happened to her accent? What happened to her vocabulary? What happened to her knowledge and love of learning? What happened to her infamous "bushy" hair? And what happened to her magic? I just can't see Hermione giving up her magic so easily (or at all) without a really good reason, one that she agreed with.

Buffy and Hermione have personalities that are so diametrically opposed that trying to turn them into the same person is going to be pretty much impossible unless you either have her memory wiped and replaced with a completely new one (which it seems would invalidate your storyline thus far), or else she would have to be someone completely different from either and both personalities would have to be intentional constructs (because there is practically no overlap) and that makes no sense with Hermione since we met her when she was only 11 and there doesn't seem to be any reason for her to have "become" someone different.

I'm not trying to bash your writing efforts, which are actually quite good, if a touch rushed. It is just that these are some issues that need to be addressed. How did this happen, and why? If Hermione went along with this crazy plan of the Council's (why would the Council want her to become Americanized when they [the Council snobs] look down on Americans in general?) because she is a good little obedient girl, what happened to change her into headstrong Buffy so quickly? And where would the desire to be "normal" have come from? Being a witch certainly isn't much more normal than being a slayer, and I don't see Hermione WANTING to give up being a witch, since she loved it so much.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [2 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Tuttle
Review:
I love it! Your characters are well thought out and the story well paced. I would have liked to see Buffy rip Travers' head off but that's more to do with my intense hatred for the arrogant git!

Seriously though, great story update soon!

Please :D
Review By [Tuttle] • Date [1 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An intriguing group of twists. Would Buffy still have her Hermione account at Gringots and be able to get a new wand? She might be looking for any advantage or weapon.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Good story so far. Definitely need longer chapters and more frequent updates. Like 2 a day. Keep it up. And update soon please!!!!
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [1 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
I think that the episode 'Helpless' was one of the saddest and that was before thinking that Joyce was killed. I can see Giles as a Slytherin! Travers is such a slimy guy, I hope that we'll see some retribution. Dumbledore and Remus's reaction to the "new" Hermione and what it means will be interesting.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [1 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from arkeus
Review:
Not the most intelligent thing to do, buffy :/
I dislike buffy!witch, because except if her power was "changed" into that of a slayer, she should still use spells when needed, and i hate slytherin!giles because he isn't that stupid, or weak, and "wild youth" is much more in tune with gryffondor.

Edit: i didn't say it was a bad story, or a bad plot, just that i disagreed on a few things :-) And, well, in the books, all slytherin *are* kind of rash, stupid, and especially weak, so...And they lack the "vitality" that giles has. Sorry :p
Comments from author:
Slytherins aren't stupid. LOL. Nor are they all evil or crazy or whatever. Some are, well most are, but in my opinion they aren't all evil and as to why I made Giles a Slytherin is something that will be explained later in the story ;)

As to Buffy's powers, reasons to why my story is turning out like this is also something that will be explained later. If I told you all the answers and explanations it'd ruin the story :P

And everyone has their own opinion as to what makes a good story. This is my version. It might not be unique but it's my opinion and I write what my "muse" says. LOL. What can I say? I'm weird that way :)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [1 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from amusewithaview
Review:
My only complaint: TOO freakin' short!

Good stuff, this, good stuff. Kick Traver's lily-white butt all OVER London's dark side, PLEASE and

Danke
Comments from author:
I know...*dramatic sigh*...I always write too short. LOL. But I'm trying to make the chapters longer ;)

And I'm really glad you like it! Of course I'm gonna kick Travers butt, he's a prick after all :P
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [1 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Angeluslover
Review:
I love this story,

buffy/angel pairing please?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it ;)

But the Buffy/Angel pairing won't happen. I love Angel but due to certain "secret" reasons he never came back after he was killed in this story and it's going to stay that way I'm sorry to say :(

I do hope you'll continue to read though...
Review By [Angeluslover] • Date [1 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
Interesting read. I enjoy the fact that Giles knows about Witches and Wizards and can relate with Buffy. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [26 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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