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Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Harry
Review:
Nicely done on the final chapter. Now, how soon will the sequel be up for one and all to read?
Comments from author:
Thank-you for the three nice reviews.

To be honest I've not looked at this story in years, possibly not since '07 when it was written! I think I was going to use one of the pairs of Willow's and Kennedy's as the basis for a short series. But, you know how it goes, other projects got in the way. I did, now ever use the past Willow and Kennedy as a basis for the two 1914 characters in my fic, 'Dawn Summers and the Angel of Mons'.

So, no direct sequel I afraid, I should really edit that line out.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Harry
Review:
TWO Willows and TWO Kennedy's!?! OH LORD! Once the dimensional differeces are taken care of then its back to the usual of the reality.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
Nice job on this first chapter. Maybe, if the girls do some research, they might figure out that by cracking a vampires ribs at the heart, it will save on the use of a stake!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work. Loved the fact the Kennedys got along better than the Willows. Lol! It is amazing how a disaster can bring out the best and worst in people. I look forward to seeing the Willows and Kennedys in NYC, the Big Apple. Lol!

PS I am guessing that the American Willow and Kennedy were not from your standard time-line since they didn't seem to be worried about getting back to little Tara.
Comments from author:
On the last point you're correct. The 'Valentines' stories are all from different realities.

Lady Rosenberg and Miss DeSilver will pop up again in Belgium/Northern France in 1914 (Lets biff the Boche).

Hadn't thought about the modern W&K in 1912 NYC, it may bare thinking about at some stage.

New Seattle Slayers story starts on Monday (a Star Trek TOS xover).

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Billy Zane was a demon? Oh no, no.

Should have let Rose drown -tart.

Well that was very enjoyable. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it, and of course Billy Zane is a Demon!

Miss De Witt Bukata drown? Well she did eventually! You have to tke the Looooong view with these things!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [19 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from CPTSkip
Review:
OK, I totally did not see that coming. Lol! I love how Kennedy has to keep correcting the land lubber. But I sure hope they can find that demon quickly as I really don't want to see either of the Willows or Kennedys drown. Excellent quick update, now I want more. Lol!
Comments from author:
Ok last part today(Thursday) I actually started this story weeks ago and finished it over the Easter Break. As usual I never start posting until I've finished the fic!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
"Both women giggled as the disappeared under the covers"

It's okay Dave, this is a story not tv, seeing they had a first class cabin, I gather it would be warm enough for them not to need to disappear beneath the covers.

I always thought it was Kali myself.

Remember 'nearer my god to thee' was not written until the twenties. The band played rag time, so don't you dare disrespect that bands final moments on Earth, or the North Sea.

Oops sounding insane. You disrespect all you want, it's your story. Looking forward to next chapter.
Comments from author:
Oddly one of the things that has puzzled me is the passenger heating on the Titanic (weird but true)! In NTR in one shot there looks to be an electric bar heater(I've no idea if those were around in 1912). Anyway I think that was after Wil...sorry Lady Rosenberg had opened the door and let the cold air in. I'm assuming that the doors to the boat deck are open. But what the heck? I claim writers license!

I knew about 'nearer my god to thee' and I wasn't going to mention it. Anyway I'd have thought 'Abide with me' or 'Eternal Father' would have been more appropriate (maybe 'Help!' by the Beatles?).

As for Khali, Kali or whatever, I'm going with the cute Doctor of Phonetics, right or wrong!

As per usual...
All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [18 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeDineen
Review:
AFAIK Kali can and has been spelled several ways. As for cleaver, I think you meant clever. Even Brits don't think cleaver is clever except maybe on Eastenders. Other than that very worthy addition to you work.

I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Yeah you're right should have been 'Clever'...duh! My bad!

Thanks for the 'worthy addition' glad you think so.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
What can I say? Delightful new story. But who were the other Slayer and Witch Kennedy detected? Buffy and Dawn? Faith and someone else? And, while I don't want to ruin the ending for anyone, I bet the damn boat still sinks. Lol! And I loved the bit with ... somebody or other ... going at it in the car in the hold. You made me laugh out loud with that scene. Lol!
Comments from author:
"It's a SHIP!" Exclaimed Miss DeSilver,. And yes it does sink, I had a lot of idea's for the ending of this fic, and one of them was for the Titanic to actually reach New York!

All will be revealed soon maybe today! I've got such a backlog of stuff that needs posting.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Nice mention of the Khali( In Spanish is Kali) cult, and a very funny crossover with the Cameron movie ;).
Have you read Emilio Salgari's Sandokan Series? I think it material for a good crossover set in that time period.

See ya!
Comments from author:
Can't say I've heard of Sandokan, I shall Google it an see what it's about.

That's for your review.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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