Review of chapter "Strange Visitors" from Duquette
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You are an amazingly talented writer, this is the second of your stories that I've had the pleasure to read, and its just sublime. It is also terribly unfair, there beautifully crafted, and incredibly well thought out, and so very short. Just as the meat of the story starts to unfold they end, and you apparently don't write sequels, its like going to a four star restaurant, ordering your appetizer, and after finishing it your told that they have to give away your table. Needless to say this is VERY frustrating, I'm dying to know what happens next, and more than likely I never will.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Visitors" from firedrakegirl
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You should write a sequel! The idea has potential! I love it!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Visitors" from Iceflame
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I really, desperately want to track you down and chain you to the computer for a sequel or five! I really, REALLY want more >:). Especially since this has the potential to cause all sorts of entertainment; maybe he is seeking her as a mate? Having her lead him through a MERRY chase for that though would be FUN to watch. Not counting the fact that if the baddies Harry faces gets on her bad side, they'll soon think Wizards are 'superior' ideals getting one HELL of a challenge >:)>:)>:)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Visitors" from FariaLyton
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I very much would like to see a sequel to this, and see where it leads.
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Visitors" from MamaLadyWolf
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A really good story and one I would love to read more of. It would be neat to see what happens next.
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love the way you started this! Your Sarah is magical, believable and a good example for a post-angst (woe was me :o)) ) teenager, who is finally growing up. Your Jareth on the other hand is frustrating, manipulative, devilish(ly handsome too) and absolutely promising . :o))) Enough for me to want to do...ehm let's just say naughty things with him. But /big sigh/ He belongs to Sarah and vice versa. It was strange that Karen the "evil witch" is not so evil but much more witchy :o) Interesting use of Hogwarts there. And Toby? He is such a unique little boy. I really liked it. Please write this story for all of us who has started to dream with it. If you'll be a good little writer you will get a cookie! Or pancakes! Or if you write the following chapters fast enough, maybe even both:o)) PS: Sorry if there is something that doesn't make sense, I'm Hungarian not English.
Review By [Jadein] • Date [11 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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