I love this story. I really think you should rethink the whole not pairing Faith with Justin. I think they would be good together. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Faith with Justin? Maybe I will rethink it. It's not out of the realm of possibilities, y'know?
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm giggling out loud for this chapter...I'm totally in love with the way you handled that.
As for Bunnies...I think possibly, Nora being uber supportive like baking for patrols or something. A Justin and a slayer (any slayer) oh and one of Sarah's kids dabbles in something occult-y...that's all I can come up with for now, but I'm sure you'll figure out whatever you want to do.
And may I say smooth transition from Holly the mistress to Holly the old girlfriend...
cheers MJ
Comments from author:
The chapter that I'm writing now will definitely be the last, but I'm not saying there won't be another one! I like supportive Nora, should be fun to write. Kids dabble in the occult? I like how you think, and you'll definitely enjoy this chapter. *hint hint* And yes, I couldn't completely get rid of Holly, especially when Nora was gonna start throwing food around!
Review By [CallmemasterKent] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Pretty cool so far. I have not had the chance to watch Brothers & Sisters much, but from what I know it seems like you are doing a good job blending them. Keep it up.
Comments from author:
You really should watch it, I enjoy it. Thanks for compliment, too!
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Buffy switching bodies voluntarily? I'll just wait and see. I love Faith and Dawn, thanks for the lack of angst overkill. So keep going and I'll love it.
Comments from author:
Eek! I forgot to respond when I posted the chapter. I hope you read it, and I'm working on the next one now.
Review By [PATM] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Great Stuff! but I do wonder the whole body swap thing isn't that going to be hard to explain to the investors of the winery/other people at the celebration if Buffy has to be at any other events?
And if Faith and Justin get together wouldn't that be odd?
an idea would be if Faith was glamored to look like Buffy for the fight and then Buffy could still be there...but then again Buffy wouldn't exactly have to explain the whole supernatural side of life...though I'm sure you could figure out something else if you want to go about it that way.
Again, wonderful work!
cheers MJ
Comments from author:
Oh, don't worry. I've got this whole idea planned out for the big explanation scene with them being in the others body! I hope you'll enjoy it.
Review By [CallmemasterKent] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This is good. Dawn HAS to be a Walker in some way though, and she's not one to just sit there and be ignored... She had her mom for not very long and her dad for never. I think she'd want in...
Comments from author:
I totally agree with you. I feel Dawn, even if I somehow not made her Walker, would still want in. Hmm, perhaps I'll make this fic a bit longer for some nice Dawn fun! I need ideas though... Thanks for the review!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Not Rated
I think that this is a good story so far, even though I've never watched 'Brothers & Sisters' (I did visit the website so I know who everybody is). I like that you've started the story off slowly giving those who are not too familiar a chance to meet the characters, which is nice for the reader.
Surely Andrew could be a gay watcher? I don't know Justin's character though, Andrew isn't exactly the type of person that everybody can stand. Maybe they could have a very embarassing first date before Justin finds somebody better.
Also Buffy/Dean would be very cool.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I only introduced them like this because that's kinda how it went on the show. But, your reason works much better! :) And people on fanfiction.net suggested the same thing.. Andrew being a gay Watcher, I mean. I don't know.. I feel that if I did make Andrew gay, because his orientation is still in the air, that Kevin would only be irritated by him. Unless, of course, Kevin was a closet comic book fan or something. I'm not sure about Justin, though. He may find someone, he may not.
The question of bringing Supernatural. I doubt it will be happening sometime soon, if at all, now. We shall see.
I like this story allot more than I originally thought I would. I love how you are blending the characters of both worlds. cant wait to see what you have in store for us next.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Though, I'm totally stuck on what to do next...
Review By [Lulubell] • Date [12 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]