You know, it really would have been cool if this was continued. Too bad it seems dead as a door nail though. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Awesome, pity you've abandoned it. Could you put it up for adoption? Or make it a round robin or something? Because it would be a pity to let such a good beginning go to waste.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [2 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I hope you don't have her paying in straight cash because that is really suspicious. Especially having a five-year-old as the buyer. I think you should have her set up a bank account or something and have her purchase from the Internet.
Review By [Kenmei] • Date [4 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
The beginning of this story is really good...there's some spelling mistakes...but everyone can make mistakes like that...so it really doesn't matter. I hope you come back to this story because I'd like to keep reading.
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
{snicker} Oh, boy. This is a very interesting beginning, and I can't wait to find out what happens in the upcoming chapters. Any chance of getting more chapters anytime soon? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Not Rated
