I like it!

Brilliant! Damn, but that was fun to read.

*giggles* I like it! I hope that you get more out soon....

I can see Xander following Mal around and asking him questions. Wash would play dinosaurs with the little tyke and Xander might even help River more with her reading.....

*dances happily* Me loves this fic! I hope that you post more soon!

Oh my GOSH that is such a wonderful story. I see that you haven't written anything in a while. Please update. I would love to read more of this story.

Wow song does fit Jayne. A lot.

I figured the one who sees would have such powers :-D
Stars or Miss Edith indeed. Nice way of putting it.
Like that she's the Ballerina. Like from in Angel right?

Awww and lots of laughs.
Awww because well, the eye thing. Poor baby.
Laughs cause, Wash and Zoe? *snickers* Mommy and Daddy?
I really always did think that they'd made GREAT parents but this is too funny.

More soon please - caught the young Xan so well....

ferball

*squeals and claps* I love it!!!

sweet

A man named Sue! I love that song, always reminds me of Jayne so much. Great idea to include that, original too (as far as I know). I'm really looking forward to reading more. Soon. Now I've gotta go dig out that old music score I have of that song. Can't get it out of my head.

It's odd but enjoyable.

My only suggestion is that you may want to make it a little more cohesive. It just seems choppy from one part to the next. Course this may have something to do with Xander not remembering anything in the first part but being very insightful in these last two parts.

Interesting... Though I'm wondering what age does Xander look like.

I suppose I did only slip that in as a one liner...end of the first chapter, I think, I wrote, "Four year olds don't have much in the way of vocabulary."

its cute. . .but is xander little or older? does he remember or doesn't he? he seemed to suddenly have a 'grown up' mind halfway through the story. And he went from remembering nothing to remembering jonhy Cash?

for this challenge, I decided to go with Xander appearing four years old, with some of the memories of his former life, but mostly dim ones. he remembers the important things and people, like Willow, but not little stuff.

as for the last question, I have only this to say. Who could FORGET Johnny Cash? Don't look for logic in that bit...I love the Man in Black, so sometimes he shows up in fics.

AHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!

I love it! Wow, that was so amusing. Little!Xander the One Who Sees. How freaky for them all. The beginning was heartbreaking with Xander hiding from his father and finding out about his missing eye. ::shudders:: I hope his new "parents" will give him hugs. I bet that would be a fun new thing for him. It was a little confusing so far since he remembers some things that a grown up would, and he remembers his friends, but he doesn't remember about his eye, etc. I'm sure that will all become more clear later. Can't wait to see what comes next and how all the Firefly folks react to the Littlest White Knight. Hope you update soon!