Review of chapter "Consequences" from MirriamQWebster
I just recently got into The Pretender, so I was pretty excited to see this group of drabbles. I could wish that there was more to them, you have managed to pique my interest in what is going on in this world. Maybe just adding more chapters would work. For example, I would love to know how Jarod is going to help Angel and with what. I'd also like to see more interaction between Jarod and Faith. Even if you don't write any more, however, allow me to say that this was thoroughly enjoyable. Good work!
Review By [MirriamQWebster
] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Not Rated