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Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from twlight
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I love how Xander stood up to Cassie about the haircut. I love this wonderful series so far and I am extremely hopeful that both real life and the muse to this wonderful story will allow you to update this again soon.
Review By [twlight] • Date [25 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from theunixer
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Let me add my desire for you to continue this.

It's too good to abandon.

I really want to see how totally ruthless Xander is when the NID (and find out about the Trust if the SGC doesn't know already) tries something along with how far up the chain of command Xander would take the utter horror (not terror, horror) of his devastation of them. Also, where Xander would draw the line on his actions, if anything, beyond teaching verbal and fighting skills [things he would teach no matter what!]) when dealing with lesser things like school bullying of his charges.
Review By [theunixer] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Noooooo!!! It's just starting to really get good! C'mon boss, you know the muse will put out for this?!? Huh, huh!?! I'm sure she has a soft spot for it like I do!?!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from fayefree
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Just finished the last chapter in your Colorado High series and I have really enjoyed them. I see that you have not written anything in this series since 2007, I hope that you have not abandoned this as I got a great deal of enjoyment out of them.
Review By [fayefree] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from jujukittychick
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once again, love this series and your take on all the characters. i love the little moment with xander and daniel when he explained that yes, he would kill someone and the one with john and xander and he talked about his family. you've done such a wonderful job with this and i'd love to see more
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from bookworm
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I found a recommendation to this series yesterday, and finally read it today. I'm quite enjoying it so far, and I sincerely hope that you do come back to it at some point. For now I shall have to look through the rest of your stuff. :-)
Review By [bookworm] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from shadowflame
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Nice job so far! It's an interesting idea, de-aging Xander to put him in this situation, Daniel as his 'uncle' also makes sense... but wouldn't the NID or who ever else see through it pretty easily? The school may not know that Daniel's parents died with one kid, but the NID and US government do...
Xander's 'quirks' as he called them also make sense, but what's gonna happen when someone from the school, either teacher or student, does sneack behind him or startle him? 'Cause it's gonna happen... it's high school for pete's sake!
Look forward to more
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [21 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from sdavidm
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An intriguing cross. Looking forward to learning about this extra dimensional threat.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from BillieBog
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Just found this series and really enjoyed it. Would be great to see more, even though it has been a long time since the last one.

Thanks for sharing these,
Billie
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from FireWolfe
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Great series. Love to see more.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from AXanFan
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I have always liked stories mixing Xander with the SG1 crew. Very interesting idea to put him there as a teen with the teen clone of Jack. Has a lot of possibilities.

I understand that Xander has 60+ years of violence in his former life, but I hate to see that Xander so callously discusses killing another human being -- that killing seems to be his first option -- I would hope that Daniel could be a good influence on him as he has on the whole SGC when considering other options -- maybe Xander can re-learn some of his humanity -- as he is now I would not want to let him near a school full of kids, let alone to be living with Daniel -- if his first instinct is to kill he is way too violent to ever really trust.

I can't wait to see what develops.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from winnie
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good story, too bad that it seems to have been abandoned
Review By [winnie] • Date [24 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from WanderingShadow
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Great story the xander you portray is very interesting and seems very like how I think he'd be if he lived that long, the scene with the ax drove that home well. Im Wondering what happend to willow after the vague comment about her. I hope you continue this one sometime.
Review By [WanderingShadow] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from Jhawksun
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love this series please write more soon
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny Lane" from Lupina
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Hey!!!

I read this and the other fics of this series in one night, and I'm sooooooo curious to know whay will happem. Please tell me that you didn't abandoned this site. Keep writing, ok? this is one of the best series that I ever read.
Review By [Lupina] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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