Review By [serenityselena] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flesh and Bone" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Ooh, I'd love to see this continued somehow. That team intrigues me. And poor Graham and Tara! I really just want to hug them both until they feel better. Thanks for sharing this!
Comments from author:
I keep meaning to expand on this and keep getting distracted. Thank you! I love the idea of Graham and Tara on a team together, kicking evil alien butt. Thank you!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
You could probably expand this, and instead of stating what happened, actually write those scenes. It could be absolutely awesome.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I do have a concept for a sequel, but not sure when I'll get around to it. I'm really glad you like it, sorry that you found it muddled. I should probably go over it again.
Review of chapter "Flesh and Bone" from BooksEatLife
Review:
I really liked this. It was good, really good. Short to the point and yet managed to convey the feeling of the characters very well. When Riley was panicking there in the middle of the story, I must admit I felt a little echo of panic with him. I liked drugged Tara and Graham, they had some great dynamics. More please!
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's a very big compliment that I managed to make Riley's panic palable. For some reason drugged Tara and Graham were the easiest parts to write.
Review By [BooksEatLife] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Not Rated
oh wow!! this was really good. please continue the story ... maybe with the start of Tara falling into the briefing room and what graham was doing in the SGC!!! Tracey
Comments from author:
It was hard not to write the Tara falling into the briefing room, cause the reactions would be just so much fun. Graham is heading his own team. I may explore in this universe, I haven't decided yet.
Review By [traceyw] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]