Review of chapter "Turning" from willayork
i liked this interpretation of turning- especially that parroting of dubledore's 'next great adventure' bit but still, it didn't do much for me. maybe cuz i read it after BAP and that was ...better...maybe cuz it was only harry-but-not-harry, anyway there was only the one character, maybe it was to psy, psycologial for me,-hell- maybe cuz it's 140 AM and i need to sleep. i guess its good as a b/g to BAP but beyond that....
Review By [willayork
] • Date [28 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Turning" from Shieldage
Needs a bit of Voldemort's POV, or at least a comment on what that segment of soul disappearing will accomplish. You've got thoughts on the present actions, but no reasons for 'em.
Edit: Ah, sorry. Read Denoument, this makes sense now. Don't need to state the reasons both there and here. Maybe, though, you should change the tagline 'related to Denoument' to 'set during Denoument'.
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Turning" from Dreamweaver
Hmmm...Did Harry (I'm assuming that POV was Harry) get lucky enough to get a - ummmm - "big name" vampire turn him or was he just turned by any old vamp?
Review By [Dreamweaver
] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Not Rated