Good story, very unexpected, like.

I would like a follow-up story of this one if possible.

I really don't have anything to add to this one. The story I wanted to tell, I told. Sorry.

Excellently written, and you give us an great insight into Ziva's inner thoughts.

Good job.

Thank you. Ziva is an interesting character that is slowly growing on me (though she'll never replace Kate in my heart.) :D

Wonderful, I really really love the visuals in this story.

Thank you. This story has been killing me for the last year, so I'm glad my hard work is paying off. :)

I must have read this a dozen times since I stumbled across it. Fantastic story, and a smooth blending of both worlds. I enjoy more every time I read it.

Thank you. I don't get a lot of feedback on this one, so I'm glad your still enjoying it. It was a very different experience, writing this story. :)

Excellent story. Nice insights into both Ziva and Willow.

Thank you. It was definitely an interesting piece to write. :)

Intersting story

Thanks. :)

This is well written and worth reading - which is what I did !

Well done !

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

You know what? I'm not really all that fond of Ziva for no real reason, I think it was the whole her- brother-killed-Kate-and-she-got-Kate's-job bit that annoyed me about her. Yet again, you appear to have given me insight about someone on this show, which actually I've started on and off watching again. But, I don't mind Ziva too much, and I had to feel sorry for her, reading about having to kill her brother. I liked that she had it proven to her that Ari was working against her, and was then willing to believe him guilty of almost anything, and I liked the compassion that Willow treated her with as well. Hmm, I don't know that I'm being all that coherant, but I enjoyed this insight as always. Good work!

Your coherency is just fine!
Honestly, I'm not really fond of Ziva either, for about the same reasons as you. (There's also the fact that she seems a little too 'constructed' at time - like the whole 'problem with english slang' thing was just thrown in to show she's not perfect.)
However, she's in season 3, which I'm approaching with my Connections series, so I need to learn how to write her. I've also discovered that trying to figure out what it is about Ziva that doesn't sit right with me, helps me to understand her character a little better.
I'm happy you enjoyed this one. :)

my heart is bleeding. I feel so bad for Ziva. Thank you for this story.
Chaja

Thanks. This is one side of Ziva that is only seen once or twice, but it's what makes me like her a little more.

Very nice. I'm liking your other story as well.

Thank you. :)

Excellent, but terribly sad, story. I thought you did a very good job on Ziva David's character. And Willow's too, for that matter. Thanks for the story.

Yeah, I was kinda melancholy when I was done. I'm trying to learn how to write Ziva, so I'm glad it's working.
Thanks.

Quite interesting. Is that in the same world as your gibbs being her uncle? Quite good indeed :-)
you have a nice grasp on emotions, and your rhythm is smooth.

No, this is a complete stand-alone fic.
It was a plot bunny that needed to get purged so I could concentrate on other stuff.
Glad it worked. Thanks. :)