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Review of chapter "What is Lost" from lucyferr
Review:
Good story, very unexpected, like.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
I would like a follow-up story of this one if possible.
Comments from author:
I really don't have anything to add to this one. The story I wanted to tell, I told. Sorry.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from Greywizard
Review:
Excellently written, and you give us an great insight into Ziva's inner thoughts.

Good job.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Ziva is an interesting character that is slowly growing on me (though she'll never replace Kate in my heart.) :D
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from spring
Review:
Wonderful, I really really love the visuals in this story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. This story has been killing me for the last year, so I'm glad my hard work is paying off. :)
Review By [spring] • Date [5 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from headingout
Review:
I must have read this a dozen times since I stumbled across it. Fantastic story, and a smooth blending of both worlds. I enjoy more every time I read it.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I don't get a lot of feedback on this one, so I'm glad your still enjoying it. It was a very different experience, writing this story. :)
Review By [headingout] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from (Past Donor)Deanie
Review:
Excellent story. Nice insights into both Ziva and Willow.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It was definitely an interesting piece to write. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from Red
Review:
Intersting story
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [Red] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from DavidFraser
Review:
This is well written and worth reading - which is what I did !

Well done !
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from angelarae
Review:
You know what? I'm not really all that fond of Ziva for no real reason, I think it was the whole her- brother-killed-Kate-and-she-got-Kate's-job bit that annoyed me about her. Yet again, you appear to have given me insight about someone on this show, which actually I've started on and off watching again. But, I don't mind Ziva too much, and I had to feel sorry for her, reading about having to kill her brother. I liked that she had it proven to her that Ari was working against her, and was then willing to believe him guilty of almost anything, and I liked the compassion that Willow treated her with as well. Hmm, I don't know that I'm being all that coherant, but I enjoyed this insight as always. Good work!
Comments from author:
Your coherency is just fine!
Honestly, I'm not really fond of Ziva either, for about the same reasons as you. (There's also the fact that she seems a little too 'constructed' at time - like the whole 'problem with english slang' thing was just thrown in to show she's not perfect.)
However, she's in season 3, which I'm approaching with my Connections series, so I need to learn how to write her. I've also discovered that trying to figure out what it is about Ziva that doesn't sit right with me, helps me to understand her character a little better.
I'm happy you enjoyed this one. :)
Review By [angelarae] • Date [26 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from chajalive
Review:
my heart is bleeding. I feel so bad for Ziva. Thank you for this story.
Chaja
Comments from author:
Thanks. This is one side of Ziva that is only seen once or twice, but it's what makes me like her a little more.
Review By [chajalive] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from BigHead
Review:
Very nice. I'm liking your other story as well.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :)
Review By [BigHead] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent, but terribly sad, story. I thought you did a very good job on Ziva David's character. And Willow's too, for that matter. Thanks for the story.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I was kinda melancholy when I was done. I'm trying to learn how to write Ziva, so I'm glad it's working.
Thanks.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is Lost" from arkeus
Review:
Quite interesting. Is that in the same world as your gibbs being her uncle? Quite good indeed :-)
you have a nice grasp on emotions, and your rhythm is smooth.
Comments from author:
No, this is a complete stand-alone fic.
It was a plot bunny that needed to get purged so I could concentrate on other stuff.
Glad it worked. Thanks. :)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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