Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
honeslty if women are only bitchy, asexual or absent, I understand the direction of your universe. I think it would be a more challening story if each one wasn't about a hook-up, but I understand that series title means something. I guess crossover for the sake of romance just isn't enough for me... maybe I'm not romantic enough?
Comments from author:
Sorry for the delay in my reply, I don't seem to be getting all my e-mails lately. Curse Yahoo!
Yeah, I guess the series did start out that way, but I promise that it doesn't carry on like that. The first 7 parts were about setting up the universe, establishing who the Immortals were and their relationships (slash or otherwise) because I know that not everyone is familiar with all five of the fandoms involved.
This was the first fic I started writing, and it was a bit of wish fulfilment (can you tell?), thinking that I would write it for my own amusement and that would be the end of it.
It was only after I started to publish it on the web that the real plotline developed and I think you can see a development in my ability as a writer as well as in the plot and characters in the later chapters.
Amanda is bitchy because Amanda is bitchy, and she certainly isn't asexual (see part 7). Both she and Sam have much more to do in later chapters. The absence of Buff, Willow et al is simply because the story didn't need any more characters, they would have been left with nothing to do but twiddle their thumbs. It's for the same reason that Joe Dawson, Teal'c, Mitchell, Giles and Angel only have cameo appearances, only appearing where it would be odd for them not to.
Anyway, thanks very much for the feedback, it's always welcome, even if it's negative, else how can I improve as a writer? I hope that you give the rest of the series a chance.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [30 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
My favorite of the series.
Love the Spike and Xander too.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I loved writing it, there's just something about them sparring that I love. Hope you enjoy the rest.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jupitersdaughter
Review By [jupitersdaughter
] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]