Review of chapter "The Last Night" from
littleoldmeReview:
Cool fic! One tiny thing- it struck me as odd when Izzie used the phrase "ring me," which isn't something that is generally said in America. No idea whether you're British or not (that phrase is quite common over here), but it seemed out of place in Izzie's mouth- she'd say "let you call me" instead.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
lol. The minute you mentioned "ring me", I knew what I'd done. Yeah, that'd be the Brit in me fighting to get out. Thanks for pointing that out for me... I'll get round to fixing it in a bit.
Em
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littleoldme] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night" from
exiledReview:
Interesting story and I hope you keep it going.
Comments from author:
Thanks. This was not the story that originally came to mind, this just butted in, so there's a least one more to come.
Review By [
exiled] • Date [25 Apr 07] • Not Rated
