Lol...can you just imagine if the Siberian demon actually HAD gotten the box?: The demon held the box aloft, arrogance and triumph on his inhuman face. "Behold! The end of mankind!" His minions tittered and watched excitedly as he slip his claws underneath the flap, opening the box. A flash of light temporarily blinded all those in the room. When visions cleared, the minions expectant gazes were met with something each and every one wished to have seared from their very brains. Their lord and master was...dancing. Very exuberantly. Minions began inching backwards toward the exit, hoping against hope that their master would not notice. When he reached out a hand and grabbed his second in command, causing the smaller demon to begin dancing along with him, all others abandoned efforts of stealth and subtly, stampeding towards the exit.
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*grins* LOVE this scenario. :)
Review By [yoyoente] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
I like it. You got all the characters very well. And I can see Buffy deciding to skinny dip in freezing water, not waiting until they were firmly asleep. And the dance thing was unexpected, but fun.
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Thank you for the review! It was a fun little foray, brief but entertaining to write, and I'm glad that you enjoyed the skinny-dipping good times. Thanks!
This is hilarious! The Buffy and Jack interaction is great and really shows how similar their personalities are in many ways. I'd love to see another 'drabble' that picks up as Daniel and Jack get back to the mountain and have to explain... Good job!
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Thank you so much! Comedy isn't really my genre, so it was a pleasant challenge to write this story - and I'm glad that those similarities between Jack and Buffy came across. I think those same similarities are part of the reason why I love both characters so much!
Very funny. I have been enjoying Godless Providence so much I went out and looked to see what else you have written. I enjoyed this. It was funny and cute but the characters were still them. Very good! Anything else Buffy/Stargate in the works? Any fun ideas about to sprout legs and come out and play?
Comments from author:
While Godless Provenance will be coming to an end (thanks to the new COA deadline, I'll be finishing it tomorrow in hopes of still qualifying!), I foresee some dabbling in that universe. Not another epic story - I've already got too many other projects on the back-burners, but I think we'll be stopping in to check on everyone every now and again! And THANK YOU for the continued interest and support - it's always appreciated!
Review By [merkaba] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm slapping myself upside the head now for not noticing this story by you before. It gave me a really bad case of the giggles, which isn't too good when trying to be serious at work :-)
Wet naked Buffy, wet Jack (no nakedness though which was a pity), and dancing Daniel. What a great way to start the week!
Comments from author:
*grins* I'm glad that you found the story, and even more delighted that you enjoyed it that much. And yes, I understand perfectly how detrimental it can be to read fanfiction - especially anything that evokes a strong emotional reaction, whether that be laughing or tears - at work.
THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!
Review By [wyvernwolf] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Not Rated
*claps hands* Thank you SO much. It was awesome, and it made me laugh (and during finals that is no mean feat)! I loved the irreverence, it was exactly what I was hoping for. And the Panderra bit was just icing on the cake. *does a little self satisfied dance, Daniel style*
Comments from author:
*grins* I'm glad that you enjoyed it! The dancing prompt was the one that came through the loudest, and the clearest, and since I didn't to do a random bar scene, but something with a plot... well, this little diddy was created! I'm glad that it worked!
Review By [Kei] • Date [28 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Bust a gut this was hilarious. I would love to see a sequel where Buffy finds out that it won't wear off automatically and has to go back to help him break the Dance curse. I love this thanks for the laugh.
Comments from author:
*grins* Why thank you! I wasn't sure if I could actually pull off a humor!fic, and I'm glad to see that it seems to work!
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [27 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
God that was funny. And it is crying, nay screaming out for a sequel. Even if it is just Jack trying to explain why both him and Danny came back with black eyes from their vacation.
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*g* Yeah - poor Jack and Daniel. How embarassing to have to explain that they were KO'd by a 5 foot nothing, skinny-dipping blonde!
As someone who grew up in the northern Minnesota lake area, I can vouch for both pine sap and the temperature of the water. So reminiscent of my childhood days. I loved this drabble... wholly adorable, hilarious enough for me to snicker and get the weird looks from my daughter and yet... just so picturesque. Well done!
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*grins* Ah yes, the wonders of Minnesota. I grew up, in part, in southern Minnesota and have family in the northern reaches. No matter how hot it got in the summer, I'll be damned if those 'lakes' ever warmed past the freezing points! Then again, I'll bet you guys have clearer water up north than we ever did in the plains!