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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
This is appalling. not because it's so bad, but because it's so very good, so evocative of all that is torture and pain. It's very hard to read. Painful.

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Comments from author:
I'm relieved that the appalling didn't apply directly to the story! I was worried for a minute.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)kayariley
Review:
I've never been able to write from the first person perspective. I have a hard enough time just keeping it to one character's POV in a scene. Going to check out the rest of the stories in this series now...
Comments from author:
I don't usually do first person so this was a bit of an experiment. It didn't entirely work, but it was intriguing to try! The rest of them are third person.
Review By [(Current Donor)kayariley] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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